Wednesday, March 22, 2017

ReFoReMo Day 21: Rebecca Hirsch Plays with Words and Sounds


I love to play with words and word sounds when writing science and nature stories. I’m inspired by picture books that use language in surprising ways to bring the natural world to life. The books below incorporate rhythm, alliteration, internal rhyme, and repetition. By playing with words, each author has created a tone or mood that suits their subject, whether it’s a fun twist on the water cycle, a dramatic look at a mysterious sea creature, or an exuberant celebration of the seasons. I hope these books inspire you to play with words and their sounds as you bring your own stories to life.

GIANT SQUID by Candace Fleming











OVER AND UNDER THE SNOW by Kate Messner











RAINDROPS ROLL by April Pulley Sayre











RED SINGS FROM THE TREETOPS by Joyce Sidman











WATER IS WATER by Miranda Paul













Lerner Publishing is giving away one copy of Plants Can’t Sit Still at the conclusion of ReFoReMo. To be eligible for this prize, please leave a comment and strive to read mentor texts regularly.



Rebecca Hirsch is the author of Plants Can’t Sit Still and dozens of science and nature books for children. When she’s not writing, you can find her growing plants and gardens at her home in central Pennsylvania, playing badminton (badly) with her family, hiking in the woods, or searching for the cup of coffee she put down somewhere.

Tuesday, March 21, 2017

ReFoReMo Day 20: Vivian Kirkfield Shares Killer Opening Lines in Non-Fiction

by Vivian Kirkfield

Pssst. I’ve got a secret.
I’m having a love affair.
With picture books!

I can’t stop reading them. I always want more. And I’m especially drawn to nonfiction ones.

As a reader, the opening lines draw me in. As a writer, I’ve studied many in hopes they will help me write killer opening lines for my own stories. Here are five recent ones that helped me. I hope they help you, too.  


CLOTH LULLABY: The Woven Life of Louise Bourgeois

Written by Amy Novesky and Illustrated by Isabelle Arsenault

Opening lines: Louise was raised by a river. Her family lived in a big house on the water that wove like a wool thread through everything.









       

Written by Tanya Lee Stone and Illustrated by Marjorie Priceman
     
Opening lines: I’ll bet you’ve met plenty of doctors in your life. And I’ll bet lots of them were women. Well, you may find this hard to believe, but there once was a time when girls weren’t allowed to become doctors.










      Written and illustrated by Emily Arnold McCully

      Opening lines: In 1900, baseball was America’s national pastime. No other form of entertainment came close. Every boy owned a ball, a glove, and a dream.









Written by Laurie Wallmark and Illustrated by April Chu

Opening lines: Ada was born into a world of poetry, but numbers, not words, captured her imagination. Her mother, Lady Byron, had a passion for geometry. In fact, her nickname was “The Princess of Parallelograms.” But her famous father dominated the household. Beloved for his Romantic poems, Lord Byron was a celebrity throughout the world.






       
SEPARATE IS NEVER EQUAL: Sylvia Mendez & Her Family’s Fight for Desegregation

Written and illustrated by Duncan Tonatiuh

Opening lines: Sylvia had on her black shoes. They were shiny new. Her hair was perfectly parted in two long trenzas. It was her first day at the Westminster School. The halls were crowded with students. She was looking for her locker when a young white boy pointed at her and yelled, “Go back to the Mexican school! You don’t belong here!”








If you get a chance to read these, you’ll see one more element they have in common…they all start out with the protagonist when she is young. Word to self: editors like main characters that children can relate to.


Vivian is generously offering a picture book critique to one lucky participant at the conclusion of ReFoReMo. To be eligible, please comment on this post and make efforts to read mentor text regularly.
Vivian Kirkfield constantly takes leaps of faith. Although not fond of heights, she jumped from a perfectly good plane with her son, hiked to the summit of Pikes Peak with her husband, and parasailed over the Pacific Ocean with only the seagulls for company. A proud member of SCBWI, she presents literacy programs that entertain and engage parents, teachers and kids. When she’s not writing picture book manuscripts, Vivian gives feedback to her critique partners, plays epic games of Monopoly with her eight-year old grandson, and takes walks through the idyllic New England village of Amherst, New Hampshire where she currently resides.Her debut nonfiction picture book, Sweet Dreams, Sarah, will be published by Creston Books November 1, 2017. You can find her on Twitter: @viviankirkfield and Facebook: www.facebook.com/viviankirkfield, or visit her blog at Picture Books Help Kids Soar: www.viviankirkfield.com.