By Caron Levis
When it comes to mentor texts, I gobble what I love first
and ask WHAT I dug about the book and HOW it does it, later. Lately, I’ve
looked to books I love to help me face some writerly fears.
Fear: I am afraid of writing non-fiction. Also, SPIDERS.
Enter, I’m Trying to Love Spiders by Bethany Barton
WHAT: Combines educational information with an emotional
experience in an incredibly engaging book.
HOW: Barton
1.) Meets
her reader where they are by first meeting herself where she is—read the bio.
2.)
Creates a clear, engaging objective of Liking Spiders/Not Squashing Spiders for
her protagonist (1st person narrator.)
3)
Invites reader interaction by breaking the 4th wall, using humor, and with fabulous
page-turns.
Fear: Picture book biography/ historical non-fiction
Enter, The Youngest Marcher by Cynthia Levinson &
Vanessa Newton
WHAT: Shows that every kid has what it takes; keeps the
world’s complexity.
HOW: The personal traits that led Hendricks to protest were
ones many kids have: she can’t sit still, she observes unfairness in the world,
and she wants to be able to do any and everything she wants in life. Readers discover
they too have the material to become an asset to world. Newton’s illustration
on the last page allows a true triumph while keeping the messy, complex, danger,
and unfinished work of the world in the room.
Fear: Being told my idea is too “quiet”
Enter (slowly,) Sparky by Jenny Offill & Chris Appelhans
WHAT: Makes a story out of stillness.
HOW: Offhill creates two problems, one for the protagonist,
and one she discovers isn’t hers afterall. She uses contrast to create
endearing humor, and gives a last line melts my heart every time…slowly.
Fear: My new book’s coming out, but SOOO many great books exist already, what if…?
Enter And Two Boys Booed by Judith Viorst, illustrated by
Sophie Blackall
WHAT: Gives the reader a visceral emotional experience.
HOW:
Viorst
1.) uses a cumulative tale, which builds, just as nervous thoughts do.
2.) Invites the reader to spot the truth with
subtle key phrases like “I wasn’t one bit scared,” “lucky blue boots,” and a well
placed “but.”
3.) Plays with words to
capture the comedic beauty of nerves.
4.) Let’s the worst thing happen—AND the
best thing too.
5.) Pairs with Sophie Blackall. Look closely.
After facing my fears sometimes I just need a hug.
Enter HUG MACHINE by Scott C. Campbell.
WHAT: Turns an affectionate gesture into a story.
HOW: He raises the sweetness stakes (ahem, porcupine, whale)
with simplicity, humor, and aww.
Caron is giving away an advanced copy of May I Have A Word? illustrated
by Andy Rash, which will be released May 23rd 2017. To be eligible for the drawing at the conclusion of ReFoReMo, please leave a comment on this post and strive to read mentor texts regularly.
Caron Levis is the author of the picture book Ida, Always
(Atheneum) illustrated by Charles Santoso, which the New York Times Book Review
calls, "an example of children's books at their best." Please note
her first book, Stuck with the Blooz (HMH) took ten years and 12 rejections
before it got published. Forthcoming titles include May I Have A Word? ill. Andy
Rash, (Macmillan, 2017,) Stop That Yawn! ill. LeUyen Pham (Atheneum, 2018); Mama’s
Work Shoes, ill Vanessa Newtown (Abrams 2019.) Caron has an LMSW, MFA, and is
an adjunct professor/advisor for The New School's Writing for Children/YA MFA
program. She enjoys using acting and writing to teach social, emotional, and
literacy skills to students of all ages through her author workshops. Visit her
at www.caronlevis.com
I'm up late working on my library stack and checked in to find this lovely post! I absolutely love Ida, Always and can't wait to read your next book. Thanks for sharing how you overcome writing fears with picture books.
ReplyDeleteWe had a great time reading I'm Trying To Love Spiders - my five year old squashed the spider with glee every time! Thanks for this insightful way of reading texts. Liz Tipping
ReplyDeleteOur entire family is scared of spiders. Me MUST read I'm Trying to Love Spiders! ;) Thanks for the recommendations and the helpful WHAT and HOW answers for each one.
ReplyDelete"How: Viorst" A statement in itself, I think.
ReplyDeleteI like your underlying premise that PBs are for everyone, including adults. Good writing is good writing.
Anne Young
Love your approach to facing fears through picture books. Isn't that why we write, to help kids make sense of the world. Such a great range of picture books, now I'm Trying to Love Spiders too.
ReplyDeleteGreat mentor texts for facing fears. I think I'll have my 21 year old daughter read "I'm Trying to Love Spiders"!
ReplyDeleteConfronting fear with writing is a great idea! I see that the spider one is taken and I'm okay with that. Thanks for making writing even more cathartic!
ReplyDeleteI love this post and how it makes you look deeper into your own fears as a source of ideas! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteI loved these mentor texts and the whole concept of acknowledging fears. Thanks for the great post. And I cannot resist telling you that Ida, Always is already an all time favorite. I kept talking about it and so my husband gave it to me for Valentine's day-with a yellow ball. (He is pretty awesome.) I look forward to reading your upcoming books. Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteCaron, Thanks for sharing your fears. I bought Ida, Always as a mentor text for my loss of a pet PB. Now your book lives on my favorites shelf.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this enlightening post on using our fears to find mentor texts. I love Ida, Always! Can't wait to read your new books.
ReplyDeleteReally wishing my library had a copy of I'm Trying to Love Spiders. I could use some pointers.
ReplyDeleteThank you for these suggestions they are new to me and will are fast becoming favorites.
ReplyDeleteFacing writerly fears sounds like a good idea actually. Just another note, I loved SPARKY!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your fears and how these books helped you overcome them, especially being told a manuscript is too quiet!
ReplyDeleteI love this post! Can't wait to get my hands on that spider book and read it! (I like spiders.) Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Caron! So hard to face your fears and these are great mentor texts to help.
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate the way yo structured this post, harnessing our writer fears and matching them tormentor texts that will help us conquer them. Here's to spiders and your news book, Caron. BTW, my crit group is in love w/IDA ALWAYS. It brings me to tears every darn time. Masterful work!
ReplyDeleteWow, what a fantastic way to face your fears and write that book in the process! Just ordered "I'm Trying to Love Spiders." Thanks for the list. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat topic, and a great list to go with it. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThanks Caron, I enjoyed this post! I love the structure. I think facing fears is a big part of writing and this analysis makes it fun.
ReplyDeleteLive by faith and not by sight!! We can do it!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you selected these mentor texts and I can't wait to read them! Your approach is inspiring! Thanks very much for this post!
ReplyDeleteAmazing how many faces fear has. Great books! Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThese are great selections - but I have to confess I loved the spiders the best. Because - SPLAT!.
ReplyDeleteCaron - Thank you for your list. I put the ones I haven't read on hold at my library already. Also, thank you for IDA, ALWAYS...so sad but so, so beautiful:>
ReplyDeleteI haven't read "The Youngest Marcher", but the other four are absolutely amazing. I love the way you set your post with the fear, the what and the how. I'll be looking for your books too. Thanks, Caron.
ReplyDeleteLoved your approach to evaluating these wonderful picture books by including your writerly fears. Clever and helpful!
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading these mentor texts--I have a lot of writerly fears to overcome! Congratulations on all your upcoming publications!
ReplyDeleteThe WHAT and HOW is an easy way to identify why we're drawn to a picture book and why it engages us. Thanks for keeping it simple...but not really. (Almost like spiders now.) Great post...and books! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for this beautiful, insightful post, Caron! I also loved your thoughts about reading first, then stopping to consider why what you read moved you, and how it did so. I will put this into practice in my own reading as well. Congratulations on your upcoming book, can't wait to read it!
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Caron. I just read your mentor texts to my kids and we enjoyed each one thoroughly. As I you, I adore your books and I can't wait to read your new ones! Thanks for being part of the ReFoReMo challenge this year!
ReplyDeleteThanks for confirming that picture books are therapeutic and not just useful for doing research. That's why we love them so much, and I really love that Sparky!
ReplyDeleteThese are some great picture books--thanks for pointing out new things to appreciate them as I reread:>)
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ReplyDeleteCaron, IDA, ALWAYS had such emotional tenderness and truth I had wondered if you or someone close to you had mental health training. Now I see the LMSW and it clicks. Signed, A LCSW turned writer. :) Thank you for this wonderful breakdown of how to use fear well.
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ReplyDeleteGreat ideas, Caron! Using our fears to seek out great writing. Can't wait to jump in! Thanks for adding such a new perspective.
ReplyDeleteWow, this shows quite a emotional range. Thank you for articulating so well the qualities that make these picture books special.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your encouraging words about facing our fears and for today's great mentor text suggestions, Caron. I absolutely love IDA, ALWAYS.
ReplyDeleteCaron - thank you for this post - your ideas about using mentor texts to face and conquer writing fears really resonates. I look forward to reading May I Have a Word (what a great title!).
ReplyDeleteThanks Caron...probably something I want to write about the most...(non-fiction) does scare me the most. Your post helps me to try and understand that fear.......so maybe I'll work to overcome that!!!Write on!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea! - To face your writerly fears through mentor texts. I think I need a little therapy like that.
ReplyDeleteI use Ida Always as a mentor text. It is an exquisite example of eliciting emotion without any manipulation. I hope your next book(s) are as successful!
ReplyDeleteI love the titles you recommended for different fears! Thank you Caron!
ReplyDeleteIt's interesting to learn your approach to books, Caron. Thanks too for sharing that it took 10 years for your book to be published. I'm glad things worked out! We're fans of Ida, Always at this house.
ReplyDeleteThank you for these recommendations, Caron! I adore IDA, ALWAYS and can't wait to read these titles.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the thoughtful post, Caron. Great list of mentor texts. IDA, ALWAYS is a favorite in our house, too!
ReplyDeleteThank you for introducing me to these books and for the thoughtful questions! I love the way the illustrations in And Two Boys Booed tell a slightly different story. Also I'm Trying to Love Spiders is fantastic! I hadn't read it before (or any of these) but it is on my wish list now. Can't wait to read some of the others when they come through my library! Thank you for your post.
ReplyDeleteLove your technique of breaking mentor texts down to the WHAT & HOW, love your examples and absolutely adore IDA, Always. Thank you, Caron!
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Caron! Thank you for giving us a peek at your writing journey and your approach to using mentor texts that acknowledge your fears
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing. Great mentor reads and tips to think about as we read them and others!
ReplyDeleteThank you for these great mentor text ideas!
ReplyDeleteRead "sparky" and "hug machine" (waiting for others to come into my library). Love both of these books. So different but both so great!! Thank you for your post and insights.
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of seeking books that help us face writerly fears! Thanks for these fabulous mentor text suggestions and I will check out Ida, Always.
ReplyDeleteThis are such great texts. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteTrying to Love Spiders is so funny, bought it for someone who does NOT love spiders. The last line in Sparky is brilliant as are the illustrations. Thank you, Caron.
ReplyDeleteI have to admit I was rather shocked by how engaging I found a book about spiders! The humor and first person narrative of this really enhanced a NF story. I, too, am deathly afraid of writing a NF. It intimidates me greatly. But the way Barton incorporates the facts with humor really almost makes me feel like I ca do it...almost :).
ReplyDeleteAlso, that last line in Sparky - all the feels! That one really got me.
Fun post, Caron! Loved Ida Always! Looking forward to your new book too! And I love reading and writing NF--so much fun!
ReplyDeleteCaron, I also need to add that Ida Always is nothing short of amazing. I've cried every time I've read it, including the times I've read it on a public NJTransit train headed into work on my commute to NYC (I'm a HUGE animal lover). This book is incredibly well written and hit me at the emotional core. Kudos.
ReplyDeleteFacing and conquering writing fears equals growth as a writer - thanks for the reminder!
ReplyDeleteThank you Caron, and I love the spelling of your name. You're succinct and brief and effective with your mentor analysis of these books. I appreciate that. My March is busy this year.
ReplyDeleteI thoroughly enjoyed these mentor texts, and especially appreciated I'm Trying to Love Spiders. Those who can both write AND illustrate are so fortunate. Since I tend to write "quiet" stories, I loved Sparky.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read Trying to Love Spiders. I love the idea of admitting a fear and addressing it with a positive mindset and change of lens. What if that spider doesn't want to eat you, just maybe, he is saving you from the neighborhood mosquitoes?
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your itemized list of your own take-aways on each book you selected. Thank you for this thoughtful look and example for me. I loved Campbell's book, and missed that "He raises the sweetness stakes." I can use this right now in my revision.
ReplyDeleteCaron - I love ida, ALWAYS. It is a beautiful book. This was a really helpful post. The examples you set forth in the mentor texts are helpful for addressing many of the fears and concerns we writers try to overcome. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteFacing those writerly fears happens every time I sit down to compose my stories. Thank you, Caron, for the tips and examples to strengthen my outlook :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for this great list of books to face fears. Wishing you continued successes with your books!
ReplyDeleteLots of interesting books here - thanks for recommending them and bringing them to our shelves!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Caron, for choosing such wonderful mentor texts. Each has something special for its readers.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your insight on these mentor texts and for your encouragement to face our fears. And, I must add, that I cannot read Ida, Always without crying! It is such a beautiful story. Thank you for that!
ReplyDeleteThese are such great titles, Caron! I love your theme about facing fears. Congrats on all your forthcoming books--I'll be on the lookout for them!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing great mentor texts and your feedback.
ReplyDeleteFacing fears is a thought provoking post. Thank you. Carole Calladine
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ReplyDeleteThank you for introducing me to The Youngest Marcher. I found it very inspiring. I read Sparky and Hug Machine to a 3 year old friend of mine. She was delighted. Yes, I have many fears-one is that I will be prepublished(read unpublished) forever!Thanks for addressing those.
Great mentor tests today. I'm Trying to Love Spiders is one that is at the top of my list. LOVE IT!
ReplyDeletelove I'm Trying To Love Spiders and ADORE Ida, Always
ReplyDeleteNice overview of a great list of books.
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Ree
I truly enjoyed reading these picture books, and your insights make them even more valuable as mentor texts. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteSusan
Thanks - many of these are new to me.
ReplyDeleteI loved "Sparky' and I love your suggestions! Thanks for the post! - Alice Fulgione
ReplyDeleteIt can be so hard to overcome our fears. This was a great pep-talk for today! Thank you Caron!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great post! Thank you! I love humor and many of these books seem so sweet. I so love Judith Viorst. Can't wait to read And Two Boys Booed!
ReplyDeleteLove these books. Thanks. Barbara
ReplyDeleteThanks for letting us in on facing your fears through picture books. Great choices, lovely descriptions. <3
ReplyDeleteGreat post on finding a mentor text to help overcome the fear of writing a particular text. I too love Ida Always and look forward to your upcoming books.
ReplyDeleteGreat advice on facing writing fears. Congrats on your book! Can't wait to read it with my kiddos! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteExcellent book list, and very thoughtful considerations. I appreciate your descriptions of these selections, which filled me with enthusiasm! I'll definitely be checking these out. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteCaron, great takes on a variety of mentor texts. Thank you for breaking down your analysis of each book and what it can offer writers.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your analysis of all these books and your message of facing down your fears. My kids and I loved the book Ida Always. Now that I think of it, writing a picture book with death in it scares me! But you handled it beautifully. I'll keep my eyes open for your upcoming books.
ReplyDeleteThank you Caron for teaching how and what confronting fear with PB writings.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Caron! Now that I've read your post, I'm looking forward to curling up under a blanket and reading the books! (I'm going to have to prop them on a pillow because after all the snow shoveling I did today, my hands and arms have stopped working : ) Congratulations on all your upcoming books!!!
ReplyDeleteSuch a fun way to face your fears – through books! This is also a reminder that fears are good source for writing inspiration. Thanks for sharing this great list and best wishes with your upcoming book!
ReplyDeleteInteresting article about conquering our fears. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThank you for this post. I love the idea of countering writing fears with mentor texts. I am glad to know about these titles, especially Hug Machine, which was new to me. Scott Campbell does a great job of exploring that kid-friendly, heartwarming topic from just about every angle with humor and sweetness.
ReplyDeleteGreat post. Thank you for being so open about your fears. Can't wait to get these books from the library!
ReplyDeleteGreat idea--- facing fears by reading picture books. Thanks Caren!
ReplyDeleteA great group of 'new to me'picture books to read and study. Thanks for the suggestions, Caron!
ReplyDeleteI'm afraid of non-fiction, too. My library didn't have the spider book, but I found a read aloud of it on you-tube. What a fun and interesting book. I love the idea of facing our fears with picture books. That's one goal of writing--changing how someone sees the world for the better. Thanks for sharing these books and your thoughts about them.
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful post and I love the idea of using picture book mentor texts to deal with fears. Thanks for all the great book suggestions. I can't wait to read Ida, Always too.
ReplyDeleteCaron, your evaulation of each book were spot on and clear. I enjoyed reading what you said about each.
ReplyDeleteAnd I absolutely love IDA, ALWAYS. It made me cry and sob and love it even more. One of the best books on dealing with death that I have ever read. Thank you for creating it.
CARON: THANK YOU for the inspiration to keep writing and keep trying . . . and to keep trying and keep writing -- believing in your story "Stuck," until someone else did, and so now we all can! I LOVE THAT BOOK! THANK YOU for sticking with it and inspiring us to do the same with our writing! And "I'm Trying to Like Spiders" -- SO GREAT! This was definitely written with me in mind! THANK YOU!
ReplyDeleteWonderful post! I love the things you pointed out for us to notice. Love Ida, Always! Thanks for sharing with us!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Carson. I agree. my first read through is always just to enjoy the book.
ReplyDeleteOoooo, what a bold challenge: confronting fear and using it as a jumping-off point- I love it! Without a doubt, every writer could spend a weekend workshop building off of this concept!
ReplyDeleteI agree. I don't want to analyze at first--I just want to enjoy. I love the book descriptions here.
ReplyDeleteI love your approach to analysing, and I certainly understand the "writely fears". And yes...read and enjoy the book first, then go back and look at it more carefully. That's the way I do it, too.
ReplyDeleteYou have a unique, fun way to read mentor texts. Love your examples. Thank youQ
ReplyDeleteGreat list, looking forward to reading these.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great, fun and engaging post!! I love THE HUG MACHINE.
ReplyDeleteLove it, Caron. Thanks for sharing. I can't wait to read MAY I HAVE A WORD.
ReplyDeleteThank you for a great list of mentor texts. I love Sparky!
ReplyDeleteGreat selection of books. I enjoyed how you paired great books with fears to overcome. Bite-sized sage advice that's good for everyone! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteGreat mentor texts here! I could not get them all, but Sparky and Two Boys Who Booed, and Hug Machine were fabulous. Great advice for writers and readers.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the suggestions. The spider title immediately caught my attention.
ReplyDeleteI read and reread this post. Thank you for sharing your experience.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the encouragement to try new things and for the great reading choices. My daughter and I got a big kick out of I'm Trying to Love Spiders--what fun nonfiction! Waiting on The Youngest Marcher from the library--it looks terrific. I really enjoyed Ida, Always and look forward to your new books.
ReplyDeleteYour delightful book, IDA, ALWAYS is such a favorite book, Caron. My students ask me to read again and again. Thank you for the excellent list of titles and how to face fear.
ReplyDelete~Suzy Leopold
Can't wait to read some of the titles you suggested. Kids have real fears and to help them deal with them in a clever way is genius. Thank you for your post. Good luck with all your forthcoming books.
ReplyDeleteCaron, I appreciate your different perspective. I had the pleasure of attending a Jewish writers conference in which you were one of the presenters.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful list of books. I'm finding myself drawn to the ones that acknowledge its a messy world out there. Looking forward to all of your books...
ReplyDeleteConsider yourself embraced from afar! Sometimes simply acknowledging our fears helps us overcome them, and your words of wisdom help me look within to examine my own writing fears. Yet now I can turn them into inspirational sparks to light my way. Thanks so much!
ReplyDeleteThis is an insightful, valuable post. Enjoy the book, learn from the book, use the book to face writing fears. Thank you, Caron.
ReplyDeleteWhat fun analysis of these books related to personal and writer fears -- thanks, Caron!
ReplyDeleteJust read Sparky - totally enchanting!
ReplyDeleteA thought provoking post with some great connections between fears and PBs. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteUsing some great mentor texts, you gave us encouragement to face our fears Thank you! And of course I have to say that Ida, Always was such an incredible book. It broke my heart and gave me renewed hope all in one. LOVE!!! Can't wait to read May I Have A Word, and I am definitely checking out your others as well.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the insightful post and great mentor text suggestions!
ReplyDeleteYes on reading for fun first, then as a writer!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your perspective on these PBs and some fears a lot of us have in common! I am looking forward to reading your forthcoming books.
ReplyDeleteHey! Your picture book fears are my picture book fears. How freaky is that? Thanks for putting them into words for me, Caron, and for sharing a great list of mentors texts. SPARKY! is one of my favorites. And HUG MACHINE.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading how you approached each book from fear to analysis. Many thanks!
ReplyDeleteI loved, loved, loved And Two Boys Booed. Judith Viorst is a master.
ReplyDeleteI had so much fun reading this post and I can't wait to check out your upcoming books! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteAdding several more books to my library reserve list, Caron...MUST read And The Boys Booed..that looks amazing! What a combo...Judith Viorst and Sophie Blackall...oh my! And thank you for sharing a bit of your journey in your bio. ;)
ReplyDeleteOooo, can't wait to check out these titles!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great selection of books.
ReplyDeleteAmazed by everything that I have taken away with every blog post. <3
Would love to win a copy of this book! Thank you Caron.
ReplyDeleteThese are wonderful suggestions and mirror my picture book fears! Thanks for championing the idea that Picture Books are for everyone.
ReplyDeleteI agree, love the last line of Sparky. Looking forward to reading new-to-me The Youngest Marcher and And Two Boys Booed. Thanks for the list!
ReplyDeleteThank you for such wonderful suggested reading, Caron. I haven't read all of them yet, but my library is working on it. :)
ReplyDeleteOh, I loved the Hug Machine! These were all great. Still waiting on 2 from the library. Thanks for the great suggestions!
ReplyDeleteThe way you approach fears is so novel...so wise. I'll give it a try!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your inspiring post and great mentor text recs!
ReplyDeleteGeez, GREAT insights into using PBs to face my fears. THANK YOU! I got plenty...
ReplyDeleteWe all have fears ... love the idea of letting what we love help us grow in them. Thank you for the inspiration and wonderful book list!
ReplyDeleteVariety is the spice of life. When writers overcome self-doubt and write about topics they'd normally shy away from, they become more versatile and widen the field for publication. I plan to branch out from fiction very soon. Thanks for sharing, Caron!
ReplyDeleteGreat suggestions, thanks! I found the spider book particularly interesting since I am am working on creative nonfiction.
ReplyDeleteI find it comforting to know I'm not alone in my fears. Thanks for sharing.
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