By Linda Vander Heyden
Some of my favorite picture books are quiet stories that enlighten and encourage children. Here are some examples of inspirational stories that use beautiful, lyrical language. I believe the more we read, the stronger our writing becomes. As you enjoy these stories, notice the use of personification, alliteration, repetition, vivid verbs, and rhythm of the words.
A Dance Like Starlight by Kristy Dempsey and Floyd Cooper
Some of my favorite picture books are quiet stories that enlighten and encourage children. Here are some examples of inspirational stories that use beautiful, lyrical language. I believe the more we read, the stronger our writing becomes. As you enjoy these stories, notice the use of personification, alliteration, repetition, vivid verbs, and rhythm of the words.
A Dance Like Starlight by Kristy Dempsey and Floyd Cooper
Miss Colfax’s Light by Aimee Bissonette and Eileen Ryan Ewen
Linda is giving away one copy of Mr. McGinty's Monarchs at the conclusion of ReFoReMo. To be eligible, please leave a comment on this post and strive to read mentor texts regularly.
Linda Vander Heyden is the author of MR. MCGINTY’S MONARCHS (Sleeping Bear Press), OH, JACK! (Sleeping Bear Press, 2018), and A IS FOR ACK! (Sleeping Bear Press, 2018). She hopes her stories will make children smile…and inspire them to make the world a better place. You can visit her website at www.lindavanderheyden.com.
I've just finished some research on lyrical language and associated devices, so this post is perfectly-timed for me. I work a lot in rhyme, and I've decided to challenge myself by writing an upcoming project in this style. Thank you for these great mentor text suggestions!
ReplyDeleteHi Jennifer, I love that you also write in rhyme! I've always loved rhyming stories when done well. One of my favorites is Jill Esbaum's ESTELLE TAKES A BATH. :) Wishing you great success with your new project!
DeleteGreat mentor texts for this type of book. It takes a special gift to carry off this type of writing!
ReplyDeleteHi Sherry, glad you felt these books were a good representation of lyrical writing. I think they have the ability to draw us into a scene and feel like we are right there with the characters!
DeleteSuch inspiring books! Thank you for the ideas/resources!
ReplyDeleteHi Tjej, glad you enjoyed these stories! Wishing you all the best on your writing journey! :)
DeleteGreat books to inspire both children and those that write for them. Thank you for this list.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you found these books inspirational for kids and adults! Thank you! :)
DeleteI am so happy to see this post because I write lyrical stories. You've suggested some excellent books to read.
ReplyDeleteAnd butterflies are one of my favorite things so I absolutely love your book.
Hi Linda! Thanks for your kind words about MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS! And I love that you're writing lyrical stories. Two more of my favorites are FREEDOM SONG by Sally Walker and KISSES ON THE WIND by Lisa Moser. They will pull at your heart. All the best in your writing journey!
DeleteLove me some lyrical language! Will look out for these recommendations. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteHi Rebecca, love me some lyrical language too! :) Let me know if you have some suggestions as well!
DeleteLyrical writing in picture books is so important! And I'm especially grateful for your "Miss Colfax's Light" recommendation, since I'm trying to find more pb biography mentor texts. Thank you so much, Linda!
ReplyDeleteHi Katelyn! So glad you enjoyed MISS COLFAX'S LIGHT. :) Eileen Ryan Ewen, the illustrator, also illustrated my PB, MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS. Another PB biography I'd recommend is FREEDOM SONG: THE STORY OF HENRY "BOX" BROWN by Sally Walker. Wishing you much success with your writing!
DeleteVery timely for me, as I'm also researching and writing a lyrical pb. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteHi Tina! Glad you found the lyrical mentor texts helpful. Best of luck with your lyrical pb and all your writing projects!
DeleteThe language we use in our books is key to making them meaningful, fun, and rereadable. Looking forward to reading these mentor texts. Thanks, Linda!
ReplyDeleteSo true, Jodi! Hope you enjoy the mentor texts. :)
DeleteBeautiful books. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteGlad you like them, Lori. You are welcome!! :)
DeleteLinda great post I met you in Iowa best wishes. nice seeing you again.
ReplyDeleteHi Terri! Glad you liked the post. Aren't Iowa events amazing? :) Wishing you all the best with your writing!
DeleteSuch delicious choices...a feast for the eyes and ears. Thank you,
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sharon! Glad you liked the books. There are so many more lyrical, remarkable stories I would have liked to include. Some are so beautiful they make me cry...TEA CAKES FOR TOSH by Kelly Starling Lyons and FREEDOM SONG by Sally Walker to name a couple.
DeleteI love quiet & lyrical picture books & am looking forward to reading a few new-to-me ones. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteHi Patricia, I'm so happy to hear that you love quieter picture books. And it's good to know there's a market for them too. Of course, quirky, funny stories are also great! :)
DeleteI love lyrical picture books.
ReplyDeleteHi Janet, glad you enjoy this type of story. Thanks for taking the time to read my post! Best of luck with your writing journey.
DeleteI think these books will be very helpful for me and plan to read them.
ReplyDeleteHi Deborah, I hope you enjoy them! Happy writing! :)
DeleteHi Linda, sure do love your choices today. I see a few I need to read yet. TY for the suggestions.
ReplyDeleteHi Kathy, so good to hear from you! These books all tugged at my heart. I hope we get to meet someday. :)
DeleteI love reading and writing lyrical picture books. I need to check out When Anju Loved Being an Elephant. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteHi Manju, I love that you're writing lyrical stories! I think this type of writing is a lot like writing poetry...finding just the right words and pouring your heart out onto the page. I know you'll love Anju! Wendy Henrichs is an amazing writer. She is also an environmentalist who loves all God's creatures. Best of luck on your writing journey!
DeleteWhat a wonderful selection of books. Lyrical picture books are definitely where my heart lies. Thank you so much for this selection. Loved reading every word.
ReplyDeleteHi Sara, so happy to hear you love these stories too! Picture books sure can be powerful and tackle serious issues that kids (and adults) struggle with! Thanks for reading my post! :)
DeleteI hadn't thought of these in terms of "lyrical". I tune in to alliteration, but I see I'll go back and pay closer attention to the language in these books.
ReplyDeleteHi Sue, I think of lyrical writing as having a musical quality...the beauty of the words, the rhythm of the language, the imagery - with every word carefully chosen. Wishing you all the best with your writing!
DeleteThank you for a good list.
ReplyDeleteRee
You are most welcome, Ree! :)
DeleteI also love inspirational picture books that use beautiful, lyrical language. Thanks for these suggestions!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading my post! I hope you enjoy the stories. :)
DeleteLovely post and lyrical mentor texts. Since I have a butterfly garden, I really appreciate "Mr. McGinty's Monarchs" and its message. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHi Beverly! Thank you so much for taking good care of the butterflies! I can't imagine a world without them. And thank you for your kind words about Mr. McGinty's Monarchs!
DeleteThanks for these suggestions, Linda. My style is not lyrical, but I have some ideas that beg for a more lyrical approach. These will help.
ReplyDeleteHi David, that's one of the things I love about picture books...all the different styles! Wishing you much success with your writing!
DeleteLinda - thanks for this post and beautiful mentor texts. I love lyrical texts and it's great to see them highlighted here!
ReplyDeleteHi Melissa, I am so happy to read all the responses from people who love lyrical picture books! I have a grandson who only likes silly, quirky ones. I love those too! But I'm especially glad there is a place for the quieter picture books. Thank you!
DeleteThank you for your recommendations of picture books that use lilting, lyrical language. Sometimes a "quiet" story is just the thing a child needs, especially one that enlightens and encourages.
ReplyDeleteHi Lori, thanks for sharing your thoughts with me. I think children have always dealt with tough issues, and I believe picture books can pave the way to meaningful conversations with kids. I hope you enjoy the mentor texts! :)
DeleteA Dance Like Starlight is a new favorite!
ReplyDeleteGlad you love it too, Jennifer! :)
DeleteThank you for sharing your favorite lyrical texts.
ReplyDeleteHi Carole, hope you enjoy them! Happy writing! :)
DeleteYou are so right about the beautiful prose of each book featured including your own. I have read all of them. MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS will forever have a place in my heart as it shows how important monarch butterflies are and why mowing down milkweed is so harmful. I love how you incorporated the balance of nature naturally into the story so children understand the simplicity and complexity of the situation for Mr. McGinty. The book is beautiful through and through. Great post!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Traci! I'm grateful for your kind words. Writing MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS was a labor of love. I know how much you care about the environment. Thank you for that too!
DeleteI love lyrical language and can't wait to read these books!
ReplyDeleteHi Tracy, I hope you enjoy the stories! There are so many beautiful, lyrical picture books, but these are some of my favorites! :)
DeleteThank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteYou're most welcome! Wishing you much success (and fun) with your writing!
DeleteSuch inspiring mentor texts! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteSo happy to share them with you, Ann! :)
DeleteThanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure, Ms. G! :) Hope you find them helpful.
DeleteI loved A DANCE LIKE STARLIGHT and ONE PLASTIC PURSE. I'll definitely look for the others. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks for responding to my post! So happy you loved those books, and I'm glad you're going to look for the others. I know you'll love them too. :)
DeleteI adore every one of these books! Thanks for discussing them.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and commenting on my post, Sue! So happy to be able to share these quieter stories.
DeleteI love Mr. McGinty's Monarchs. Lyrical, quiet books are among my favorite picture books, even though it often seems daunting to have my own quiet manuscripts published. Thank you for introducing me to some lovely new books!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm so pleased you love Mr. McGinty's Monarchs and that you're writing some quiet stories. I used to wonder if it was mostly the silly, quirky stories that got published, but I know there's definitely a market for both. Wishing you the best of luck with your writing!
DeleteI so appreciate your suggestions on lyrical texts and will study these. Perfect!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jill! Hope you find them helpful! :)
DeleteI am always blown away by the incredibly lyrical language used in some Non-Fiction picture books. It's so much more challenging than just making up whatever you want!
ReplyDeleteHi Rita! Your comment made me smile. :) And you're right...it IS challenging!
DeleteGreat mentor texts - thanks for the list.
ReplyDeleteHi Nancy, I hope you're finding them helpful. Happy writing!
DeleteBooks after my own heart! Lyrical, quiet texts are my favorite. I look forward to reading Linda's suggested titles (and MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS, too!).
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your comments. I hope you enjoy these books...and MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS too! :)
DeleteThank you for the lovely suggestions
ReplyDeleteHi Heather, you're most welcome. Wishing you great success (and joy) with your writing!
DeleteIt's easy to get discouraged when the rejections say, "too quiet" about our manuscript. Thanks for giving examples and encouraging us to take heart in our lyrical stories.
ReplyDeleteHi Jen! I absolutely understand. But don't give up! Just keep writing and honing your craft. It just takes one editor to love your story and see the beauty in your writing!
DeleteThanks for this post, Linda. I love A DANCE LIKE STARLIGHT, and I was so moved by THOSE SHOES. Kindness and selfless acts are much needed examples among our children and, honestly, us adults. I still have to read the other books.
ReplyDeleteHi Joana, I absolutely agree. Picture books are a powerful way to teach children about the importance of kindness and compassion in this world. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. All the best with your writing!
DeleteThank you for these beautiful mentor text suggestions!
ReplyDeleteYou're so welcome, Mary! I hope you love them as much as I do. :)
DeleteBeautiful! I love the same type of books because they enlighten and encourage me as well! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteHi Angie! I feel the same way! Thanks for allowing me to share my love of lyrical writing with you.
DeleteThank you for these books! They are so beautifully written and have such deep themes.
ReplyDeleteYou're most welcome, Alexandra. I'm very happy you liked them. Wishing you much success and joy on your writing journey!
DeleteCan't wait to learn from these texts, thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI hope you find them helpful, Christine! Thanks for commenting on my post. Happy writing! :)
DeleteHi Linda, thanks for this great list. Can't wait to check these out. By the way, I LOVED Mr. McGinty's Monarchs!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rita! You just made my day. :) So glad you loved Mr. McGinty's Monarchs! I hope the mentor texts are helpful and that you enjoy them. Wishing you all the best!
DeleteWhat a wonderful collection of books!
ReplyDeleteHi Angie! Glad you like the mentor texts. I appreciate the opportunity to share them with you. Happy writing! :)
DeleteI'm eager to order thee from the library. Thanks for this list. Much appreciated, Linda.
ReplyDeleteI hope you find them helpful, Barbara. I love each one and keep finding more that touch my heart. Picture books are the best!! :)
DeleteI love a good lyrical picture book and I'm excited to read those that you recommend. Thanks for your post.
ReplyDeleteHi Debbie! Thanks for the opportunity to share these beautiful books with you. I hope you enjoy them. :)
DeleteYour words speak to my heart, Linda Vander Heyden! My goal is to serve the children with lyric and wholesome verse!
ReplyDeleteBless your heart!
Thanks for your kind words, Nancy Jo! I love that you want to "serve the children with lyric and wholesome verse." I think that it's important to examine why we write for kids. I love the idea of bringing happiness to kids and making them smile. Also, helping them make sense of this complicated world. Wishing you much joy as you write. :)
DeleteI agree completely that reading makes you a better writer. Whenever I'm feeling stuck, reading is always the perfect inspiration and it definitely strengthens my writing as well. Beautiful choices! Thanks.
ReplyDeleteHi Erin! My kids are all grown, and I miss all the bedtimes stories we read together. But I still love reading picture books just for fun. Sometimes my writer friends join me for a weekend retreat, and we read picture books to each other and discuss what works and what doesn't. Glad you liked the stories in my post! Thank you!
DeleteI love quiet picture books, but I think, sadly, they are hard to sell to publishers. I find them the best to re-read.
ReplyDeleteHi Savannah, I agree. I think the silly, quirky stories are easier to sell. However, I strongly believe the quiet ones have a place too, especially if they are educational or inspirational, without being didactic. Wishing you much success with your writing!
DeleteThanks for sharing this lovely list, Linda! I also love quiet and lyrical stories that inspire kids.
ReplyDeleteYou're most welcome, Gabi! I hope you enjoy the stories and find them helpful. :)
DeleteThank you, Linda, for your list...will request these at my library today:>
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome, Polly! :)
DeleteI love quiet picture books as much as I love funny, quirky picture books. Thank you for this list, Linda. Looking forward to reading them
ReplyDeleteHi Tracey, we definitely have that in common! Hope you enjoy the stories and find them helpful.
DeleteGreat post, Linda! Thank you for the wonderful selection of lyrical picture books to use as mentor texts
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words! I'm so glad you like the selection of lyrical stories as mentor texts. Happy writing! :)
DeleteI am familiar with 2 of these books. I'll reread them with an eye to alliteration, strong verbs, repetition, personification and rhythm with the words.
ReplyDeleteHi Susan! That sounds like a plan! There's a beautiful book of children's poems called DARK EMPEROR & OTHER POEMS OF THE NIGHT by Joyce Sidman. It's a Newbery Honor Book. If you have a chance to read some of her work, I think you'd see many amazing examples of all the things you mention. Beautiful writing!
DeleteThank you, Linda, for sharing these inspirational mentor texts. I love my copy of Mr. McGinty's Monarchs. Every season they fly in and out of my yard and I think of your beautiful book.
ReplyDeleteOh, Charlotte, thank you! I am so grateful for your kind words. They mean a lot to me. I hope the monarchs have a good year and that their numbers increase. And may we both see many of them flying in and out of our yards! :)
DeleteNice recommendations. Checking out Mr. McGinty's Monarchs next!
ReplyDeleteHi Juliana, hope you find the mentor texts helpful. Thanks for checking out Mr. McGinty's Monarchs!
DeleteThank you for sharing this list of books and discussing lyrical language. A Dance Like Starlight is so beautiful...
ReplyDeleteHi Viviane, thanks for commenting on my post. I agree. A Dance Like Starlight is beautifully written and illustrated!
DeleteI love PBs that sing with emotion, quietly or otherwise. Thanks for your mentor text suggestions, Linda. Monarchs are magical and their migration is truly amazing.
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my post! Glad you love picture books that are emotional. I read one recently that made me cry. It is called OUR TREE NAMED STEVE by Alan Zweibel. It is funny and poignant at the same time. I hope you have a chance to read it. I agree...monarchs are indeed magical. I hope they will be around for future generations to enjoy. They face so many challenges! Wishing you much success with your writing!
DeleteLinda thank you for sharing wonderful examples of lyrical mentor texts.
ReplyDeleteYou're very welcome, Therese! Happy writing! :)
DeleteI love quiet, lyrical stories! A Dance like Starlight is a favorite. Thank you for the mentor text suggestions and post.
ReplyDeleteHi Elizabeth. Thanks for commenting on my post! A DANCE LIKE STARLIGHT is one of my favorites as well. So beautifully written AND illustrated!
DeleteLinda, great choices for mentor texts. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteYou're very welcome, Cathy! I'm glad you feel they are helpful!
DeleteI am currently trying to revise a draft from rhyme to lyrical writing, so thanks for this post and the mentor text suggestions!
ReplyDeleteWow, Sandy! That is a challenging and creative endeavor! I have a couple rhyming manuscripts that I considered trying to write without the rhyme. I would love to know how you are doing with that. You can always reach me through my website. Wishing you much success with this and all your writing projects! :)
DeleteAlthough this is not the focus of today, necessarily, I love when picture books arch in a way that surprises me, and leads me to something unexpected, wih the 'problem' r 'issue' being rectified in a unique way. THOSE SHOES really did that for me-what a pleasantly real story.
ReplyDeleteAnd in regards to what today does focus on, I remember the first time I read A DANCE LIKE STARLIGHT and literally danced my way through the pages. The lyrical language was perfect for a dancing text.
Hi Melissa! I met Maribeth Boelts at a conference in Iowa. Another author told me, "She's the nicest person in Iowa!" I smile every time I think of that comment, because she really is amazing. Actually, Iowa writers and illustrators are all a friendly bunch! :) Loved your comment about A DANCE LIKE STARLIGHT!
DeleteThank you Linda for your recommendations of picture books that use lyrical language. Something new to me. Great selection!
ReplyDeleteYou're very welcome, Maritza. I'm very happy you enjoyed the mentor texts!
DeleteCan't wait to read these!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Shanah! Hope you enjoy them as much as I have! :)
DeleteEven your book title is wonderfully lyrical! Thanks for these great suggestions.
ReplyDeleteOh, thanks, Amie! Mr. McGinty's Monarchs just popped into my head. I love Irish names. :)
DeleteThank you for this selection. I am finding that most of my writing has been described as quiet and lyrical. I'm looking forward to reading these books as mentor texts.
ReplyDeleteHi Judy, I'm glad you enjoy writing this type of story. A couple other lyrical stories I love are FREEDOM SONG by Sally Walker and KISSES ON THE WIND by Lisa Moser. I think you'd really enjoy them. Happy writing! :)
DeleteThanks for highlighting these selections! They are inspiring! Great post!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Nancy! Glad you liked the post and mentor texts!
DeleteI really enjoy quiet, lyrical books. Thank you for your suggestions!
ReplyDeleteYou're very welcome, Anne! Best of luck on your writing journey! :)
DeleteLinda, thank you for listing some of the elements of lyrical language. I want to learn more about it. I'm not a rhymer, but would love to be able to write lyrically.
ReplyDeleteLyrical language sings its own sweet melody; it is so necessary for children to appreciate the quiet sounds, especially now as life can often seem loud and dissonant. I love teaching kids to listen for the poet's voice as they read their books. How lovely to share these books with us! Your Mr. McGinty's Monarchs is a must in our school library. 10 years ago I started a butterfly garden that is a Monarch Waystation.
ReplyDeleteHugs from a kindred spirit!
More great books to read. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteLyrical language is something I admire so much, though I'm not strong in that area of writing myself. Thanks for this list of great books to learn more from!
ReplyDeleteI love to read and write inspirational picture books as well. Thank you for sharing Linda!
ReplyDeleteThank you Linda. Quiet, lyrical picture books are among my favorites too. Thank you for the list of mentor texts.
ReplyDeleteQuiet books are some of my favorite books. These suggestions are perfect.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing these lovely books. I enjoy quiet books--and these are inspiring, as well.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this list. Thank you for your post.
ReplyDeleteI love lyrical language. I look forward to reading these suggestions.
ReplyDeleteLINDA: THANK YOU for the WONDERFUL book examples to study, as well as the points to look for as we study -- and LOVE -- them! Your MR. MCGINTY’S MONARCHS should be on this list, too!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the great book ideas.
ReplyDeleteLinda,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for this list! I'm all set to read for personification, alliteration, repetition, vivid verbs and rhythm of words.
Thank you for these suggestions. There are a couple new-to-me selections that I look forward to reading.
ReplyDeleteThank you for these suggestions. I love that when children hear lyrical language in books like these, they are learning how beautiful language can be.
ReplyDeleteThank you Linda for the list of books- lyrical and emotional development at the same time for kids.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your reading choices--three of which I am not familiar with. I love reading beautiful language, too. It is such a treat and very inspiring for my own writing!
ReplyDeleteI was able to get three of these fine books. I already had One Plastic Bag and had read A Dance Like Starlight. I texted my sister today and told her about Mr. McGinty's Monarchs. She "raises" butterflies and loves to share nature with her grandchildren.
ReplyDeleteNow I know what lyrical PB's are thank you very match. Also your book sounds wonderful a story about monarch butterflies awesome!!
ReplyDeleteThese books are just beautiful read aloud! I look forward to reading Mr. McGinty, as we (in Austin) are in their migration path!
ReplyDeleteLyrical and quiet are the picture books that I like to write. Thank you for sharing some excellent titles, Linda.
ReplyDelete~Suzy Leopold
Several of these books were new to me and I’m so glad for the chance to read them. They are all so beautiful in both language and message, as is Mr. McGinty’s Monarchs. Thank you for your post!
ReplyDeleteI loved these mentor texts. They truly reach the heart. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteStruggling with a lyrical text right now, thanks for the inspiration.
ReplyDeleteThank you Linda!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Linda. Lyrical text is also my favorite and I'm so glad to add these as my mentors.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate how you convey the beauty of the "quiet" stories that are impactful and often inspirational with their messages. These are excellent mentor text suggestions, so many thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda for your mentor text and suggested books...I just love lyrical books! They always make my spirit light and inspire me...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Linda for your great list of quiet, lyrical books. Very insightful!
ReplyDeleteWord use is such a fun part of writing and revising -- thanks for these PB recommendations, Linda!
ReplyDeleteLyric writing is such a gift! I am reading way too many "rhyming garbage but somehow published by big houses" stuff - what is up with THAT?
ReplyDeleteSuch wonderful inspiring writing. Thank you for this list.
ReplyDeleteA sweet lyrical story is the best! I'll be taking your list to the library tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteThank you for some great mentor texts. I find writing lyrically difficult. By reading more I'm hoping to improve.
ReplyDeleteLyrical texts w beautiful art--my favorite! Though quietish books are often a tough sell. Thanks for these!
ReplyDeleteI'm definitely drawn to these kinds of stories--both to read and to write :) Thanks, Linda!
ReplyDeleteGreat list - I'm always looking for books that focus on lyrical language.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this list of lyrical PBs!
ReplyDeleteI loved MISS COLFAX'S LIGHT, and I love lyrical, so I'll definitely check out the rest--including your MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS. Thank you, Linda.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this terrific selection of mentor texts and this inspiring quote: "...the more we read, the stronger our writing becomes." Yes!
ReplyDeleteThanks you for reminding me to be attentive to language and all its expressive forms.
ReplyDeleteI am working on a more quiet, lyrical story so this post was perfect. I've read many of the mentor texts but can't wait to check out the others I'm not familiar with yet. Thank you and congrats on your continued success!
ReplyDeleteThey tell us that editors don't like quiet books...but when the quiet books have incredible stories/characters/settings...they cannot be denied! Thanks so much, Linda, for suggesting these...I need to get Miss Colfax's Light and A Dance Like Starlight.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful books! Thanks for sharing these suggestions with us! (I've not read the elephant one... adding to my list now!)
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful story A Dance Like Starlight is! The lyrical writing truly enhanced the tale. Liz Tipping
ReplyDeleteGreat list! Love Miranda Paul!
ReplyDeletePersonification, alliteration, repetition, vivid verbs, and rhythm of the words!
ReplyDeleteYES!
Such great mentor texts, and great gift-away. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThank you for these great suggestions, Vivian, and for reminding us of the beauty of quiet books. We can learn much from their lyrical language and storytelling.
ReplyDeleteThese texts are great -- I really liked Miss Colfax's Lighthouse. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThank you for these texts - aspirational for how to do lyrical right!
ReplyDeleteI'm a huge Monarch fan! Looking forward to reading your book.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Linda, for these wonderful suggestions. I've read the first two books and I'm waiting for my library to bring in the other three for me, plus yours when they are available. (I have a list.)
ReplyDeleteHi Michele! I was curious about your comment and wondered if you meant that the quieter books are more difficult to get published. I'm glad you love the more lyrical books as well. Wishing you much success and fun with your writing!
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