Wednesday, March 15, 2017

ReFoReMo Day 15: Linda Vander Heyden Sheds Light on the Lyrical Side

By Linda Vander Heyden

Some of my favorite picture books are quiet stories that enlighten and encourage children. Here are some examples of inspirational stories that use beautiful, lyrical language. I believe the more we read, the stronger our writing becomes. As you enjoy these stories, notice the use of personification, alliteration, repetition, vivid verbs, and rhythm of the words.


A Dance Like Starlight by Kristy Dempsey and Floyd Cooper  


One Plastic Bag by Miranda Paul and Elizabeth Zunon










Those Shoes by Maribeth Boelts and Noah Z. Jones












When Anju Loved Being an Elephant by Wendy Henrichs and John Butler








Miss Colfax’s Light by Aimee Bissonette and Eileen Ryan Ewen



Linda is giving away one copy of Mr. McGinty's Monarchs at the conclusion of ReFoReMo. To be eligible, please leave a comment on this post and strive to read mentor texts regularly. 


Linda Vander Heyden is the author of MR. MCGINTY’S MONARCHS (Sleeping Bear Press), OH, JACK! (Sleeping Bear Press, 2018), and A IS FOR ACK! (Sleeping Bear Press, 2018). She hopes her stories will make children smile…and inspire them to make the world a better place. You can visit her website at www.lindavanderheyden.com.







161 comments:

  1. I've just finished some research on lyrical language and associated devices, so this post is perfectly-timed for me. I work a lot in rhyme, and I've decided to challenge myself by writing an upcoming project in this style. Thank you for these great mentor text suggestions!

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    1. Hi Jennifer, I love that you also write in rhyme! I've always loved rhyming stories when done well. One of my favorites is Jill Esbaum's ESTELLE TAKES A BATH. :) Wishing you great success with your new project!

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  2. Great mentor texts for this type of book. It takes a special gift to carry off this type of writing!

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    1. Hi Sherry, glad you felt these books were a good representation of lyrical writing. I think they have the ability to draw us into a scene and feel like we are right there with the characters!

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  3. Such inspiring books! Thank you for the ideas/resources!

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    1. Hi Tjej, glad you enjoyed these stories! Wishing you all the best on your writing journey! :)

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  4. Great books to inspire both children and those that write for them. Thank you for this list.

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    1. So glad you found these books inspirational for kids and adults! Thank you! :)

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  5. I am so happy to see this post because I write lyrical stories. You've suggested some excellent books to read.

    And butterflies are one of my favorite things so I absolutely love your book.

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    1. Hi Linda! Thanks for your kind words about MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS! And I love that you're writing lyrical stories. Two more of my favorites are FREEDOM SONG by Sally Walker and KISSES ON THE WIND by Lisa Moser. They will pull at your heart. All the best in your writing journey!

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  6. Love me some lyrical language! Will look out for these recommendations. Thanks!

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    1. Hi Rebecca, love me some lyrical language too! :) Let me know if you have some suggestions as well!

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  7. Lyrical writing in picture books is so important! And I'm especially grateful for your "Miss Colfax's Light" recommendation, since I'm trying to find more pb biography mentor texts. Thank you so much, Linda!

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    1. Hi Katelyn! So glad you enjoyed MISS COLFAX'S LIGHT. :) Eileen Ryan Ewen, the illustrator, also illustrated my PB, MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS. Another PB biography I'd recommend is FREEDOM SONG: THE STORY OF HENRY "BOX" BROWN by Sally Walker. Wishing you much success with your writing!

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  8. Very timely for me, as I'm also researching and writing a lyrical pb. Thank you!

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    1. Hi Tina! Glad you found the lyrical mentor texts helpful. Best of luck with your lyrical pb and all your writing projects!

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  9. The language we use in our books is key to making them meaningful, fun, and rereadable. Looking forward to reading these mentor texts. Thanks, Linda!

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    1. So true, Jodi! Hope you enjoy the mentor texts. :)

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    1. Glad you like them, Lori. You are welcome!! :)

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  11. Linda great post I met you in Iowa best wishes. nice seeing you again.

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    1. Hi Terri! Glad you liked the post. Aren't Iowa events amazing? :) Wishing you all the best with your writing!

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  12. Such delicious choices...a feast for the eyes and ears. Thank you,

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    1. Thanks, Sharon! Glad you liked the books. There are so many more lyrical, remarkable stories I would have liked to include. Some are so beautiful they make me cry...TEA CAKES FOR TOSH by Kelly Starling Lyons and FREEDOM SONG by Sally Walker to name a couple.

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  13. I love quiet & lyrical picture books & am looking forward to reading a few new-to-me ones. Thank you!

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    1. Hi Patricia, I'm so happy to hear that you love quieter picture books. And it's good to know there's a market for them too. Of course, quirky, funny stories are also great! :)

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    1. Hi Janet, glad you enjoy this type of story. Thanks for taking the time to read my post! Best of luck with your writing journey.

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  15. I think these books will be very helpful for me and plan to read them.

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    1. Hi Deborah, I hope you enjoy them! Happy writing! :)

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  16. Hi Linda, sure do love your choices today. I see a few I need to read yet. TY for the suggestions.

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    1. Hi Kathy, so good to hear from you! These books all tugged at my heart. I hope we get to meet someday. :)

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  17. I love reading and writing lyrical picture books. I need to check out When Anju Loved Being an Elephant. Thanks!

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    1. Hi Manju, I love that you're writing lyrical stories! I think this type of writing is a lot like writing poetry...finding just the right words and pouring your heart out onto the page. I know you'll love Anju! Wendy Henrichs is an amazing writer. She is also an environmentalist who loves all God's creatures. Best of luck on your writing journey!

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  18. What a wonderful selection of books. Lyrical picture books are definitely where my heart lies. Thank you so much for this selection. Loved reading every word.

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    1. Hi Sara, so happy to hear you love these stories too! Picture books sure can be powerful and tackle serious issues that kids (and adults) struggle with! Thanks for reading my post! :)

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  19. I hadn't thought of these in terms of "lyrical". I tune in to alliteration, but I see I'll go back and pay closer attention to the language in these books.

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    1. Hi Sue, I think of lyrical writing as having a musical quality...the beauty of the words, the rhythm of the language, the imagery - with every word carefully chosen. Wishing you all the best with your writing!

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  20. I also love inspirational picture books that use beautiful, lyrical language. Thanks for these suggestions!

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    1. Thanks for reading my post! I hope you enjoy the stories. :)

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  21. Lovely post and lyrical mentor texts. Since I have a butterfly garden, I really appreciate "Mr. McGinty's Monarchs" and its message. Thank you.

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    1. Hi Beverly! Thank you so much for taking good care of the butterflies! I can't imagine a world without them. And thank you for your kind words about Mr. McGinty's Monarchs!

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  22. Thanks for these suggestions, Linda. My style is not lyrical, but I have some ideas that beg for a more lyrical approach. These will help.

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    1. Hi David, that's one of the things I love about picture books...all the different styles! Wishing you much success with your writing!

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  23. Linda - thanks for this post and beautiful mentor texts. I love lyrical texts and it's great to see them highlighted here!

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    1. Hi Melissa, I am so happy to read all the responses from people who love lyrical picture books! I have a grandson who only likes silly, quirky ones. I love those too! But I'm especially glad there is a place for the quieter picture books. Thank you!

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  24. Thank you for your recommendations of picture books that use lilting, lyrical language. Sometimes a "quiet" story is just the thing a child needs, especially one that enlightens and encourages.

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    1. Hi Lori, thanks for sharing your thoughts with me. I think children have always dealt with tough issues, and I believe picture books can pave the way to meaningful conversations with kids. I hope you enjoy the mentor texts! :)

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  25. A Dance Like Starlight is a new favorite!

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  26. Thank you for sharing your favorite lyrical texts.

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    1. Hi Carole, hope you enjoy them! Happy writing! :)

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  27. You are so right about the beautiful prose of each book featured including your own. I have read all of them. MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS will forever have a place in my heart as it shows how important monarch butterflies are and why mowing down milkweed is so harmful. I love how you incorporated the balance of nature naturally into the story so children understand the simplicity and complexity of the situation for Mr. McGinty. The book is beautiful through and through. Great post!

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    1. Thank you so much, Traci! I'm grateful for your kind words. Writing MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS was a labor of love. I know how much you care about the environment. Thank you for that too!

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  28. I love lyrical language and can't wait to read these books!

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    1. Hi Tracy, I hope you enjoy the stories! There are so many beautiful, lyrical picture books, but these are some of my favorites! :)

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    1. You're most welcome! Wishing you much success (and fun) with your writing!

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  30. Such inspiring mentor texts! Thank you!

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    1. My pleasure, Ms. G! :) Hope you find them helpful.

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  32. I loved A DANCE LIKE STARLIGHT and ONE PLASTIC PURSE. I'll definitely look for the others. Thank you.

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    1. Thanks for responding to my post! So happy you loved those books, and I'm glad you're going to look for the others. I know you'll love them too. :)

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  33. I adore every one of these books! Thanks for discussing them.

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    1. Thanks for reading and commenting on my post, Sue! So happy to be able to share these quieter stories.

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  34. I love Mr. McGinty's Monarchs. Lyrical, quiet books are among my favorite picture books, even though it often seems daunting to have my own quiet manuscripts published. Thank you for introducing me to some lovely new books!

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    1. Thank you! I'm so pleased you love Mr. McGinty's Monarchs and that you're writing some quiet stories. I used to wonder if it was mostly the silly, quirky stories that got published, but I know there's definitely a market for both. Wishing you the best of luck with your writing!

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  35. I so appreciate your suggestions on lyrical texts and will study these. Perfect!

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    1. Thanks, Jill! Hope you find them helpful! :)

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  36. I am always blown away by the incredibly lyrical language used in some Non-Fiction picture books. It's so much more challenging than just making up whatever you want!

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  37. Great mentor texts - thanks for the list.

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  38. Books after my own heart! Lyrical, quiet texts are my favorite. I look forward to reading Linda's suggested titles (and MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS, too!).

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  39. It's easy to get discouraged when the rejections say, "too quiet" about our manuscript. Thanks for giving examples and encouraging us to take heart in our lyrical stories.

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  40. Thanks for this post, Linda. I love A DANCE LIKE STARLIGHT, and I was so moved by THOSE SHOES. Kindness and selfless acts are much needed examples among our children and, honestly, us adults. I still have to read the other books.

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  41. Thank you for these beautiful mentor text suggestions!

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  42. Beautiful! I love the same type of books because they enlighten and encourage me as well! Thank you!

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  43. Thank you for these books! They are so beautifully written and have such deep themes.

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  44. Can't wait to learn from these texts, thank you for sharing.

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  45. Hi Linda, thanks for this great list. Can't wait to check these out. By the way, I LOVED Mr. McGinty's Monarchs!

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  46. What a wonderful collection of books!

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  47. I'm eager to order thee from the library. Thanks for this list. Much appreciated, Linda.

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  48. I love a good lyrical picture book and I'm excited to read those that you recommend. Thanks for your post.

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  49. Your words speak to my heart, Linda Vander Heyden! My goal is to serve the children with lyric and wholesome verse!
    Bless your heart!

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  50. I agree completely that reading makes you a better writer. Whenever I'm feeling stuck, reading is always the perfect inspiration and it definitely strengthens my writing as well. Beautiful choices! Thanks.

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  51. I love quiet picture books, but I think, sadly, they are hard to sell to publishers. I find them the best to re-read.

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  52. Thanks for sharing this lovely list, Linda! I also love quiet and lyrical stories that inspire kids.

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  53. Thank you, Linda, for your list...will request these at my library today:>

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  54. I love quiet picture books as much as I love funny, quirky picture books. Thank you for this list, Linda. Looking forward to reading them

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  55. Great post, Linda! Thank you for the wonderful selection of lyrical picture books to use as mentor texts

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  56. I am familiar with 2 of these books. I'll reread them with an eye to alliteration, strong verbs, repetition, personification and rhythm with the words.

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  57. Thank you, Linda, for sharing these inspirational mentor texts. I love my copy of Mr. McGinty's Monarchs. Every season they fly in and out of my yard and I think of your beautiful book.

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  58. Nice recommendations. Checking out Mr. McGinty's Monarchs next!

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  59. Thank you for sharing this list of books and discussing lyrical language. A Dance Like Starlight is so beautiful...

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  60. I love PBs that sing with emotion, quietly or otherwise. Thanks for your mentor text suggestions, Linda. Monarchs are magical and their migration is truly amazing.

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  61. Linda thank you for sharing wonderful examples of lyrical mentor texts.

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  62. I love quiet, lyrical stories! A Dance like Starlight is a favorite. Thank you for the mentor text suggestions and post.

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  63. These are my favorite kinds of books too! Thanks for highlighting them - it often feels like all resources point to innovative/unique presentation these days.

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  64. Linda, great choices for mentor texts. Thank you!

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  65. I am currently trying to revise a draft from rhyme to lyrical writing, so thanks for this post and the mentor text suggestions!

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  66. Although this is not the focus of today, necessarily, I love when picture books arch in a way that surprises me, and leads me to something unexpected, wih the 'problem' r 'issue' being rectified in a unique way. THOSE SHOES really did that for me-what a pleasantly real story.
    And in regards to what today does focus on, I remember the first time I read A DANCE LIKE STARLIGHT and literally danced my way through the pages. The lyrical language was perfect for a dancing text.

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  67. Thank you Linda for your recommendations of picture books that use lyrical language. Something new to me. Great selection!

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  68. Even your book title is wonderfully lyrical! Thanks for these great suggestions.

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  69. Thank you for this selection. I am finding that most of my writing has been described as quiet and lyrical. I'm looking forward to reading these books as mentor texts.

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  70. Thanks for highlighting these selections! They are inspiring! Great post!

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  71. I really enjoy quiet, lyrical books. Thank you for your suggestions!

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  72. Linda, thank you for listing some of the elements of lyrical language. I want to learn more about it. I'm not a rhymer, but would love to be able to write lyrically.

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  73. Lyrical language sings its own sweet melody; it is so necessary for children to appreciate the quiet sounds, especially now as life can often seem loud and dissonant. I love teaching kids to listen for the poet's voice as they read their books. How lovely to share these books with us! Your Mr. McGinty's Monarchs is a must in our school library. 10 years ago I started a butterfly garden that is a Monarch Waystation.
    Hugs from a kindred spirit!

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  74. Lyrical language is something I admire so much, though I'm not strong in that area of writing myself. Thanks for this list of great books to learn more from!

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  75. I love to read and write inspirational picture books as well. Thank you for sharing Linda!

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  76. Thank you Linda. Quiet, lyrical picture books are among my favorites too. Thank you for the list of mentor texts.

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  77. Quiet books are some of my favorite books. These suggestions are perfect.

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  78. Thank you for sharing these lovely books. I enjoy quiet books--and these are inspiring, as well.

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  79. I really enjoyed this list. Thank you for your post.

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  80. I love lyrical language. I look forward to reading these suggestions.

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  81. LINDA: THANK YOU for the WONDERFUL book examples to study, as well as the points to look for as we study -- and LOVE -- them! Your MR. MCGINTY’S MONARCHS should be on this list, too!!!

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  82. Thanks for the great book ideas.

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  83. Linda,
    Thank you so much for this list! I'm all set to read for personification, alliteration, repetition, vivid verbs and rhythm of words.

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  84. Thank you for these suggestions. There are a couple new-to-me selections that I look forward to reading.

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  85. Thank you for these suggestions. I love that when children hear lyrical language in books like these, they are learning how beautiful language can be.

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  86. Thank you Linda for the list of books- lyrical and emotional development at the same time for kids.

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  87. Thanks for your reading choices--three of which I am not familiar with. I love reading beautiful language, too. It is such a treat and very inspiring for my own writing!

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  88. I was able to get three of these fine books. I already had One Plastic Bag and had read A Dance Like Starlight. I texted my sister today and told her about Mr. McGinty's Monarchs. She "raises" butterflies and loves to share nature with her grandchildren.

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  89. Now I know what lyrical PB's are thank you very match. Also your book sounds wonderful a story about monarch butterflies awesome!!

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  90. These books are just beautiful read aloud! I look forward to reading Mr. McGinty, as we (in Austin) are in their migration path!

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  91. Lyrical and quiet are the picture books that I like to write. Thank you for sharing some excellent titles, Linda.
    ~Suzy Leopold

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  92. Several of these books were new to me and I’m so glad for the chance to read them. They are all so beautiful in both language and message, as is Mr. McGinty’s Monarchs. Thank you for your post!

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  93. I loved these mentor texts. They truly reach the heart. Thank you!

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  94. Struggling with a lyrical text right now, thanks for the inspiration.

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  95. Many thanks, Linda. Lyrical text is also my favorite and I'm so glad to add these as my mentors.

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  96. I appreciate how you convey the beauty of the "quiet" stories that are impactful and often inspirational with their messages. These are excellent mentor text suggestions, so many thanks for sharing!

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  97. Thanks Linda for your mentor text and suggested books...I just love lyrical books! They always make my spirit light and inspire me...

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  98. Thank you, Linda for your great list of quiet, lyrical books. Very insightful!

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  99. Word use is such a fun part of writing and revising -- thanks for these PB recommendations, Linda!

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  100. Lyric writing is such a gift! I am reading way too many "rhyming garbage but somehow published by big houses" stuff - what is up with THAT?

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  101. Such wonderful inspiring writing. Thank you for this list.

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  102. A sweet lyrical story is the best! I'll be taking your list to the library tomorrow.

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  103. Thank you for some great mentor texts. I find writing lyrically difficult. By reading more I'm hoping to improve.

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  104. Lyrical texts w beautiful art--my favorite! Though quietish books are often a tough sell. Thanks for these!

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  105. I'm definitely drawn to these kinds of stories--both to read and to write :) Thanks, Linda!

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  106. Great list - I'm always looking for books that focus on lyrical language.

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  107. Thank you for this list of lyrical PBs!

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  108. I loved MISS COLFAX'S LIGHT, and I love lyrical, so I'll definitely check out the rest--including your MR. MCGINTY'S MONARCHS. Thank you, Linda.

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  109. Thank you for this terrific selection of mentor texts and this inspiring quote: "...the more we read, the stronger our writing becomes." Yes!

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  110. Thanks you for reminding me to be attentive to language and all its expressive forms.

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  111. I am working on a more quiet, lyrical story so this post was perfect. I've read many of the mentor texts but can't wait to check out the others I'm not familiar with yet. Thank you and congrats on your continued success!

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  112. They tell us that editors don't like quiet books...but when the quiet books have incredible stories/characters/settings...they cannot be denied! Thanks so much, Linda, for suggesting these...I need to get Miss Colfax's Light and A Dance Like Starlight.

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  113. Beautiful books! Thanks for sharing these suggestions with us! (I've not read the elephant one... adding to my list now!)

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  114. What a beautiful story A Dance Like Starlight is! The lyrical writing truly enhanced the tale. Liz Tipping

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  115. Personification, alliteration, repetition, vivid verbs, and rhythm of the words!
    YES!

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  116. Such great mentor texts, and great gift-away. Thanks!

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  117. Thank you for these great suggestions, Vivian, and for reminding us of the beauty of quiet books. We can learn much from their lyrical language and storytelling.

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  118. These texts are great -- I really liked Miss Colfax's Lighthouse. Thank you!

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  119. Thank you for these texts - aspirational for how to do lyrical right!

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