
Upon reading the first piece of an author’s work, you test
the waters with just one toe. As you read more, the cool water tickles your ankles
and you notice common strengths between multiple works. You quickly submerge
deeper, motivated by your findings. Pretty soon, you are swimming! This author
shines in several ways and the work may possess common themes.
Just as the summer sun prompts us to dive right in, Maria Gianferrari’s work is burning bright. Since July of 2015, she has released six books and today marks the release of her seventh. Happy Book Birthday, Hawk Rising!
Maria Gianferrari… Word Economizer
The economy of words is important in our world of 300-400
word picture books. Vivid verbs not only enhance visualizations and ignite
interplay between text and pictures, but they also make language sing and
promote action. Maria masters the economy of words in all of her work, and
continues in her newest, Hawk Rising. A few of the verbs you’ll find:
Stretch
Screech
Jostle
Perch-hunts
Streaks
Curving
Turning
Searching
Waiting
Noticing
Sunbathing
Dives
Scuttles
And more…
Do you sense poetic value as these verbs are isolated? I see
a picture of a hawk emerging in my mind! The verbs alone tell a story. It is not
uncommon to see this in all of Maria’s picture books. Challenge yourself and
your students to find poetry in verbs as you study her work.
Maria Gianferrari… Language Capitalizer
As touched on above, verbs are one way that Maria
capitalizes on language. But consider the similes in Terrific Tongues:
“A tongue like a
straw” or “A tongue like an air conditioner”
And Coyote Moon, which additionally features onomatopoeia:
“As quiet as a ghost” and “POUNCE!”
As well as sensory language, precisely placed amongst an already quiet,
sneaky setting:
“Twigs crack.”
Or the use of metaphor in Hello Goodbye Dog, comparing a dog’s legs to vehicle’s
brakes:
“Moose put on her brakes.”
Maria Gianferrari… Story Weaver
Growing up, I remember the stiff, emotionless nonfiction
offerings that did not excite me to read or learn more. But when facts are
infused with story, we become invested readers, not even realizing that we are
learning at the same time. We are led by inquiry, through an innocent observer’s
eyes.
In Hawk Rising and Coyote Moon, we want to follow the animals
on their night journey and we wonder:
How do they hunt? Are they always successful? Will their babies
starve? Will any creatures get in their way?
Whether fiction or nonfiction, Maria always weaves a story
and inspires problem solving, too:
In Officer Katz and Houndini, it’s a problem-solving
showdown between characters. Deputy Catbird designs traps and Houndini solves
his way out.
In Penny & Jelly: The School Show, Penny problem solves her way to finding the perfect talent show act. And truly, it is no different for her nonfiction animal characters, who problem-solve their way to a family dinner. Every traditional story features a character failing multiple times, but finding a solution in the end. This is the mark of a great story.
Keep your eye out for more mentor text greatness from Maria,
as Operation Rescue Dog comes out in September! And in the meantime, Roaring
Brook Press is sponsoring a giveaway in celebration of Hawk Rising. U.S. Residents
may enter below:
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Maria Gianferrari's favorite pastime is searching for
perching red-tailed hawks while driving down the highway. When she's not
driving, she loves watching birdcams. Her favorite feathered stars are Cornell
hawk Big Red and her late mate, Ezra, who together raised fifteen chicks since
they began nesting in 2012. Maria is also the author of Hello Goodbye
Dog and Coyote Moon, both published by Roaring Brook Press as
well as the Penny & Jelly Books (HMH), Officer Katz & Houndini (Aladdin), Terrific
Tongues (Boyds Mills Press) and the forthcoming Operation Rescue Dog (Little
Bee). She lives in Virginia with her scientist husband, artist daughter, and
rescue dog, Becca. Visit her at mariagianferrari.com, on Facebook or Instagram.
I love these examples of Maria's vibrant writing style, especially the fun action verbs and sensory language!
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DeleteWhat a lovely mentor text study! I had not heard about Maria’s work, but now I am so excited to find these books and share them with my children! I can particularly see my 5 year old son being enthralled by all the amazing animals that Maria so clearly loves. THank you for sharing, and happy book birthday, Maria!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ledys!! I hope your 5 yr old enjoys them :)
DeleteLove the engaging verb language and use of animals.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the great post. I loved seeing the list of verbs. Makes me want to isolate verbs in some manuscripts to see where they can be beefed up too. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed that too, Elizabeth :)
DeleteThere isn 't a book Maria has written that I don't fall in love with. Congrats on your newest, Maria. And I know I have strong verbs, but need to weave those facts more seamlessly into NF.
ReplyDeleteYou're too kind, Kathy--thanks for saying so <3!
DeleteWonderful post. I especially like those vivid verbs and want to read them in action. Can't wait to read Hawk Rising and Terrific Tongues!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tracy!! I hope you'll like them :)
DeleteThanks so much, Carrie!! I am honored to be a featured author here on ReFo!! <3 <3
ReplyDeleteGreat post! and yes to more verbs. I love Maria's books and have Hawk Rising and Terrific Tongues in my reading basket.
ReplyDeleteI hope you'll enjoy them, Sue!! My reading basket is bursting too :)
DeleteThis is wonderful, Carrie. I strive to write more like Maria. The examples are terrific.
ReplyDeleteThanks, David!! :)
DeleteI saw elsewhere that you are a bird nerd too :)
DeleteHappy book birthday! Congratulations! Great language!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Angie!! :)
DeleteI love rhis. So excited to read Hawk Rising. I love nature and dogs as well. My sister and I count the Red Tails when we take trips too. Our best number was 9 in 25 miles.
ReplyDeleteI love counting them too, Sarah!! :)
DeleteGreat post! I'm going to have to think and study more. One of my all time favorite animals in a picture book is the little bear in Blueberries for Sal. Love their interactions and their thought processes!
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ReplyDeleteI love Maria's books. I just got Coyote Moon, and I can't wait to read Hawk Rising. Thanks for the great information in this post!
ReplyDeleteI hope that you'll enjoy them, Linda!
DeleteWonderful post! These are great mentor texts. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by, Cathy!
DeleteI love playing with words! I guess that's why I love the art of picture books so much. Maybe one day, I'll actually get one published. Here's hoping!
ReplyDeleteDon't give up, Carolyn & you'll get there! Happy writing!
DeleteLovely post! I agree with all the wonderful kudos!
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DeleteTerrific post about active verbs and their effect in showing emotion in your books, Maria :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Charlotte!
DeleteI love her work and am excited for the chance to win a copy❤️
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Janie--good luck!!
DeleteHappy book birthday to Hawk Rising! Congratulations, Maria!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Carol!!
DeleteThank you for your explanations and use of verbs to show things. I have loved your stories that I can find and have Hello Goodbye Dog on my desk now. Your books are fun and informative. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks & I hope you'll enjoy Hello Goodbye Dog, Sheri :)
DeleteWhat a great post! I agree that Maria and her work is perfect for a mentor text author study -- such a talent! Thanks for sharing, Carrie! :)
ReplyDeleteHappy Book Birthday, Maria!
Full disclosure: Sheri is my friend and critique partner and a wonderfully funny PB writer <3 <3
DeleteI have a special place in my heart for Hello, Goodbye Dog, so this book is my favorite animal picture book.
ReplyDeleteYou're the best, Danielle!! Thanks & hugs!! <3
Delete"Tell us about your favorite animal picture books or characters." The characters in Richard Scarry books! They're always busy!
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DeleteFabulous post showcasing the multi-talented Maria! Can't wait to read Hawk Rising.
ReplyDeleteHmmm--is that you, Nancy??? Thanks! :)
ReplyDeleteLove your books Maria. Can’t wait to read Hawk Rising. I’ll review and put my verbs on weights so they lift my drafts up high!
ReplyDeleteKind of you, Susan--thank you!!
DeleteGreat post, so much to absorb! Having fascinating non fiction stories that grab your attention is such an improvement over the old dry books I remember.
ReplyDeleteNonfiction is more engaging and fun than ever these days! Enjoy, Marty!
DeleteLove this interview, Maria. I can't wait to read HAWK RISING!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kirsti <3
DeleteI am so inspired by your post and great mentor text. I'm off to review my verbs! Thank you
ReplyDeleteI get my thing in action--VERB--that's what's happenin' (School House Rock rocks!)
DeleteI can't wait to get my hands on this one...I LOVE hawks! You are truly on a roll Maria! Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Donna!! I love them too! I hope you'll like it!
DeleteThanks for reminding me, and everyone else, the importance of picking that just-right word!
ReplyDeleteThat's the art of the picture book :)
DeleteGreat info about Maria's writing. Great verbs from Hawk Rising! Looks gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tina!! Looking forward to reading Rice From Heaven when it releases :)!
DeleteMy favorite animals are zebras and giraffes.
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DeleteMagic happens when you make every word count, Maria...and you are a master kidlit magician!!
ReplyDeleteLikewise, Vivian!! <3
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