Were there any particular mentor texts that inspired you in the creation of Rice from Heaven?
YES! My agent sent out an earlier draft of Rice from Heaven to a few editors, and they came back pretty much with the same comments—They loved the story line, but the writing needed work. So, my agent suggested that I make the story more dreamy and lyrical. Well, how does a writer do that? I’m not a poet, and so I took to storming through the Internet in search of mentor texts and ANYTHING about writing a lyrical picture book.
The first mentor text I used was Red Kite, Blue Kite by Ji-li Jiang, Disney Hyperion 2013. The first page reads:
"I love to fly kites. But not from the ground. My city is crowded, and the streets are skinny. Baba and I fly our kites from the tippy-top of our triangle roof. We are above but still under, neither here nor there. We are free, like the kites."
From this book, I learned about using comparison (metaphor & similes) and using an image theme throughout the book.
Next, I read many blog posts about lyrical texts, even one from ReFoReMo here.
Many of the blog posts about writing lyrical texts had one mentor text in common: JANE YOLEN’S OWL MOON. Can you believe in all my years of teaching and raising my own two children, I had never read this book?! And here I was in South Korea, and I didn’t have access to it. So, I checked You Tube. Yep, someone had a video reading of the book. You won’t believe what I did. I watched it so slowly, stopping every few words, and typed up the whole book!
I learned that it was written in free verse with illustrative, descriptive words, some repetition, with a refrain, lots of emotion, alliteration, simile, metaphor, and written in first person point of view.
So I rewrote my original draft to a more lyrical, dreamy draft. You can see some drastic differences:
From draft #11: “Yoori loves rice. A bowl of rice with her egg at breakfast, rice and soup for lunch, and rice with vegetables and meat for supper. When her teacher said that some children had one meal a day or nothing, Yoori was shocked and sad.”
From draft #17 that sold: “Out of the city, across a bridge, to an island blanketed with rice fields, Appa and I ride. We reach a place where mountains become a wall. A wall so high, no one dares to climb. Beyond that wall and across the sea, live children just like me, except they do not have food to eat. North Korea is a gigantic empty rice bowl with a government that does nothing to help its people. Appa grew up there. Starving, he escaped down here to the south. I am a little grain of rice. How can I help?”
How has reading picture books helped you discover who you are as a writer?
Since I’ve been an elementary teacher for many years, I’ve read many, many picture books. I’ve discovered what kinds I lean toward—funny, those with heart, and picture book biographies. So those are the kinds of stories I’m trying to write as well.
What do you feel is the BEST way for picture book writers to utilize mentor texts?
For me, I utilize mentor texts the most when I’m stuck and need help as I described above with lyrical texts. Then I search for books in the genre and format I’m trying to write in. I read as many as I can and take notes on the author’s strategies and craft. I did this with nonfiction picture book biographies, and my latest, novels in verse.
Thank you so much for talking mentor texts with us today, Tina! As a school library media specialist, I appreciate Rice From Heaven's themes of human need, serving others, working together, and standing up for what is right. These are the qualities we strive to implement at my school and I appreciate how prayer is woven into the story's fabric. The frequent use of metaphor and simile deepen the point of view and compassion felt throughout the story. Keum Jin Song's illustrations beautifully highlight emotion and teamwork, and the back matter provides relevant Korean history, creating a research springboard for students.
Tina Cho is the author of three picture books-- Rice from Heaven: The Secret Mission to Feed North Koreans (Little Bee Books/Bonnier Publishing August 2018), Korean Celebrations (forthcoming Tuttle 2019) and Breakfast with Jesus (forthcoming Harvest House 2020). Although she grew up and taught in the United States, she currently lives in South Korea with her husband and two children while teaching at an international school.
Tina and Carrie, Thanks for this great post. Congratulations, Tina! Thank you for reminding us that mentor texts are so important to our writing. Have got to add Rice From Heaven to my book list.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Mona. Hope you like it.Delete
Thank you, Tina, for showing how you utilized the mentor texts to address specific issues in your own text. A very helpful post!ReplyDelete
Thanks again, Patricia, for your support! Glad it was helpful.Delete
Thank you, Tina, for sharing your strategies using mentor texts. Love the tip of searching YouTube for a read aloud! Congratulations!ReplyDelete
Glad it was helpful! Happy searching!Delete
Wow. That really helps. I love seeing how you actually transformed your writing from an early draft to a later draft. And the breaking down of the process. Looking at a mentor text and figuring out what it had that you needed. Very helpful! Thank you!ReplyDelete
Thank you, Michelle. Happy writing!Delete
Americans (big & small) need to learn about different cultures and we seem to know more about Europe than Asia. Why is that?! I look forward to reading Rice from Heaven and thank you, Tina, for sharing your experience. It’s inspiring to know even successful authors need a little help from their (mentor text) friends! Thank you, Carrie, for the reminder. 😊ReplyDelete
I'm thinking we know more about Europe because America started as a break-off from Europe. But thank you for your interest in Rice from Heaven!Delete
Owl Moon is one of my very favorite books, Tina!! Looking forward to reading your book! Congrats!!ReplyDelete
Yes, my mom bought it for me this summer :) Congrats on your upcoming book w/Little Bee!Delete
This helps so much. Thank you and congratulations on you new book.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Cassie. Glad it was helpful.Delete
This is a great post, Ladies. And so helpful, Tina!ReplyDelete
Thanks, Trine, for your input on the story!Delete
Great post, Tina. This is very helpful.ReplyDelete
Thanks for reading, Pat.Delete
Congrats, Tina, and thank you both for sharing how to make the most of mentor texts. Especially loved seeing the transformation between draft 11 and 17.ReplyDelete
Thanks, Marty. Yes, studying mentor texts is very effective!Delete
Congrats, Tina! Thank you for sharing your search for the right mentor texts. I look forward to reading your new book :)ReplyDelete
Thank you, Charlotte!Delete
Wonderful interview, and I love the excerpts. I'm looking forward to reading your dreamy new book!ReplyDelete
Fantastic! Thanks for sharing!ReplyDelete
Wow- the sample of your edits is really breathtaking. Goes to show how many different ways you could approach the same story.ReplyDelete
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