In 2015 I invited participants to READ and REFLECT with me. In 2016 I
asked that participants THINK like a reader. With 2017 was
the invitation to OBSESS over words, and last year in
2018 I emphasized the strong START, strong END
companionship.
Today, I share a set of books whose words
carry more weight than their combined space on the page. These are lines and
phrases whose implications are deep and moving and revealing and affirming.
These words, like those you’ll write in your own story, have the power to reach
readers, change readers, stay with readers.
These words and these stories have stayed with
me.
A
LIFE’S WORK TAKING ROOT IN MANY OTHERS’ LIVES
Planting Stories:
The Life of Librarian and Storyteller Pura Belpré by Anika Aldamuy Denise and Paola Escobar
START: It
is 1921. Pura Teresa Belpré leaves her home in San Juan for a visit to New
York. Words travel with her: stories her abuela taught her.
END: The
seeds she has planter, the roots that grew into shoots into the open air of
possibility, have become a lush landscape into which she steps, as though she
has never left.
Born Bad by C K Smouha and Stephen Smith
START: Wolf
wasn’t happy being Wolf. When he looked in the mirror, he looked bad, and when
he looked bad, he felt bad, and when he felt bad, he acted bad.
END: “I
feel good!”
Super Satya Saves
the Day by Raakhee Mirchandani and Tim
Palin
START: It
was a loud day, on a loud street, in the very loud town of Hoboken.
END: But
she knew her day was super because she was… Super Satya!
Hands Up! by Breanna J. McDaniel and Shane W. Evans
START: Greet
the sun, bold and bright! Tiny hands up!
END: As
one we say, “HANDS UP!”
Finn's Feather by Rachel Noble and Zoey Abbott
START: On
the first day of spring, Finn opened the front door and discovered a feather on
his doorstep.
END: The
feather was no longer white. No longer perfect. But it was still amazing.
My Heart by Corinna Luyken
START: My
heart is a window
END: Closed
or open… I get to decide
Iver and Ellsworth by Casey W. Robinson and Melissa Larson
START: Ellsworth
is a rooftop bear. Underneath him, a factory hums and a man bustles. The man’s
name is Iver. Iver and Ellsworth are good friends.
END: “Good.”
Iver nods. “Very good.”
Honeysmoke: A Story
of Finding Your Color by Monique Fields and
Yesenia Moises
START: Simone
wants a color.
END: The
next day she sees her color written in the clouds, in the tree leaves, and on
the grass, and she writes it on her schoolwork, on the classroom window, and in
chalk on the playground.
The Bell Rang by James E. Ransome
START: The
bell rings, and no sun in the sky.
END: Free
like the birds. Free like Moses. No more bells.
The Real Boat by Victoria Semykina and Marina Aromshtam
START: A
paper boat was sailing in a pond.
END: At last, he was a real boat.
END: At last, he was a real boat.
Matthew is
giving away a 30 minute Skype session on a topic of your choosing. Brainstorm
story ideas. Critique a manuscript. Build a strategy for expanding your social
media presence. Develop a personalized recommended reading list to support your
writing and story developing. You name it. To be eligible for prizes throughout the challenge, you must be registered by March 4, comment on each post, consistently read mentor texts, and enter the Rafflecopter drawing at the conclusion of ReFoReMo.
Matthew
Winner is an elementary school librarian living in Howard County, Maryland. He
is the host of The
Children's Book Podcast, a weekly podcast featuring insightful and sincere
interviews with authors, illustrators, and everyone involved in taking a book
from drawing board to bookshelf. In 2013 Matthew was named a Library Journal
Mover & Shaker and was invited to the White House as part of the Champions
of Change program. Matthew currently teaches library media at Swansfield
Elementary School in Columbia, Maryland. Visit Matthew online at www.matthewcwinner.com/blog or
on Twitter at @MatthewWinner.
Matthew, I loved this post and the approach! Getting in the mind set to craft the power opening, or opening sentence or segment with the main question, theme or promise fulfilled by the amazing ending--be it mystical, pronounced, lyrical,etc ---this was awesome to see that condensed process! Thanks for formatting these wonderful books--so we see immediately, what the stakes are in each story --and what the ultimate pay off is for each.
ReplyDeleteBeginnings and endings make the story. There are some wonderful examples here of powerful words. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteLove this straight forward way of discovering the amazing transitions that take place in these important books, all great choices!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great list to learn from! As a PB writer where every single word counts, it’s so important to remember how important each and every one of them is to my young readers!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this amazing list of poignant first and last sentences with deep meanings.
ReplyDeleteAgreed,,,what Bettie said. Thanks Matthew for making us wonder what magic lies in between those two parts; the beginning and end. I loved the selection you chose!
DeleteThank you for these beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing these powerful beginnings and endings!
ReplyDeleteWords are powerful! Thank you for these wonderful selections!
ReplyDeleteTheses are such great examples- thank you!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for these wonderful examples with such lasting words.
ReplyDeleteThese examples really make it clear how word choice is powerful in creating feeling to go along with the deeper meaning in a picture book.
ReplyDeleteMatthew this is a perfect list from right now as i'm writing a PB about a big matter , , , food pantries through the eyes of a young girl and what she does to help. YOUR highlighted books will be mentor texts for me. TY,
ReplyDeleteSuch great books that linger in your heart and head! Thank you, Matthew.
ReplyDeleteThanks Matthew -- what a great list! (And I love that you included my friend Casey Robinson's Iver & Ellsworth!)
ReplyDeleteI always look forward to your post in ReFoReMo. This one filled with power words and meanings is SUPER. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteAmazing list, Matthew. I have only read a couple of these, but just reading the first and last lines have resonated! I always love your posts and reflections. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteWhat great selections to study! Loved thinking about these beginnings and endings! Thanks, Matthew!
ReplyDeleteThank you for compiling a wonderful list of powerful beginnings and endings!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the recommendations, Matthew! Today I will look closely at the meanings behind beginnings and endings.
ReplyDeleteI am very excited to read today! Off to the Libary. Matthew, thank you for the wonderful texts and insight.
ReplyDeleteInteresting post on beginnings and endings.
ReplyDeleteTerrific books indeed! Thank you for your insightful post.
ReplyDeleteI especially appreciated Matthew Winner’s links to his ReFoReMo posts in previous years. The books for today were thought provoking and helpful. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThis is a selection of books filled with emotion, personal discovery and ways to find healing within you.
ReplyDeleteThis post pairs so well with Marcie Flinchum Atkins' post on first and last lines. Love how all these takes on mentor text use build on one another and really get us thinking on a deeper level on word choice.
ReplyDeleteI love Iver and Ellsworth!
ReplyDeleteWonderful examples! And thanks for the recap of your focus in past posts--a good reminder of what to look for in mentor texts!
ReplyDeleteThanks for this list and what you've given us to think about!
ReplyDeleteSuch great books. I love a book that stays with you long after you've finished it. <3
ReplyDeleteI agree with Sara Fajardo--I love your look at beginning and ending lines, and I love the look at overall theme. What a great list of beautiful books! Thank you for reminding us of the power of our words. :)
ReplyDeleteMy Heart stole my heart.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your list of books that stayed with you. Great ones!
ReplyDeleteIver and Ellsworth and Finn’s Feather will stay with me, lingering. Thanks, Matthew.
ReplyDeleteGreat examples. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteYour posts are always inspirational - this one most definitely is! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how the beginnings and the endings worked together - particularly in some where they reflected each other. And I'm always a sucker for a book about seeds - whether it's about flower seeds, story seeds, or planting the seeds of literacy.
ReplyDeleteGreat list of powerfully written books. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks Matthew - this is really what it's all about in writing for kids - particularly in the economic, powerful space of picture books. Love Hands Up!
ReplyDeleteThanks for introducing me to all these new non-fiction titles which were hard to find in my county library system but I did find 4 of them. I like to keep track of first line hooks.
ReplyDeleteMatthew, what a great reflection on the power of these words to wind through our soul.
ReplyDeleteAll of these are amazing books! Thank you for sharing the beginning and ending of each one!
ReplyDeleteSuch an amazing list! Most were unavailable at my library, but your sharing of their beginning and ending was helpful.
ReplyDeleteSo inspiring! Love these titles.
ReplyDeleteThis is why I love picture books- it is the deep meaning behind such few words. Words that sit their on the pages, and then jump out and move into our hearts, and into our minds...and those are the words that stay with us. These texts are great exampled of that.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the post! I loved how you compared the beginnings and endings, summing up the whole journey.
ReplyDeleteThanks for introducing me to some new titles!
ReplyDeleteMatthew, How lovely that you've given us this insight into powerful words. Thank you, Nancy Ferguson
ReplyDeleteSo many beautiful books in this list. I wish my library carried more of them-- I'll have to talk to them about changing that!
ReplyDeleteThank you for all of these beautiful words! I love to just collect beginning and ending lines. So powerful to see how the book is framed.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Matthew, for the links to your purposeful posts dating back to 2015. I plan on reading these.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I appreciate your thoughtfulness this year in choosing books that speak to our hearts. I hope to write posts, articles and books that will “stay with” the readers, whether young or old.
These mentor texts will help me as I work to improve my writing. I appreciate your kindness and encouragement.
Thank you Matthew for such a great approach to reading picture books. I have always known that a great opening line is an important element, but the idea thought of putting the beginning and the ending side by side like this is fantastic. This tool will really help as I read the mentor texts. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteI love paying special attention to beginning and ending lines. Thanks for the post!
ReplyDeleteBeginning to end, thank you, Matthew, for sharing these amazing mentor texts. Your words will stay with me.
ReplyDeletegreat examples, great post!
ReplyDeleteThank you for pointing us toward these books. They have such strong messages.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Matthew, for sharing these stories that have stayed with you. Many of these titles are new to me, and it's been lovely digging into them.
ReplyDeleteWhat a terrific list! Thanks so much for sharing.
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Matthew. Thanks for being an inspiration in this #kidlit community.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Matthew! Great post and important topic for us to focus on and consider (though I'm still obsessing over words, too!)...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you for these examples!
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh, I love this list so much! I need to read every one of these. And I'm so in love with the cover of Born Bad. So simple, but so awesome.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing these mentor texts.
ReplyDeleteLove this! A great group exercise is to select a book that no one has read before- note its first and last lines, then each of you create YOUR own middle. Now compare those with each other and with the published work! Interesting how unique each of our ideas truly are!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome! I really like the recommendations, and looking at the opening next to the end is amazing. I can’t wait to read the ones I’m missing and to see the lines for my favorite PBs. Thank you for the post.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing these books. I'm looking forward to reading them.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this post!
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of comparing beginning lines and ending lines. Thanks, Matthew for sharing with us.
ReplyDeleteAs some have already commented, first & last impressions are so very important. After all, one makes you want to keep reading, the other to read again. Of all the above books, Pure Belpre was my hands down favorite one :)
ReplyDeleteI always look forward to your posts. I am looking forward to reading a few books I hadn't seen before, especially Real Boat. Thanks Matthew.
ReplyDeleteThanks for this. Great way to look a books...
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful collection of first and last lines. So inspirational! Thanks for putting this list together.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing "a set of books whose words carry more weight than their combined space on the page." What a lovely gift! I shall be checking my latest manuscript through this lens.
ReplyDeleteJust like you, Matthew, these are "winners" - I love your podcast, too!
ReplyDeleteI see how these first and last lines resonate, but I find that once I've read the book, I can't divorce the illustrations from the text. For example, the last two spreads of BORN BAD carry (and brilliantly divert) the weight of all that came before. So it makes the "I feel good!" moment as transformative as the last spread in Santat's AFTER THE FALL.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this list of first and last lines!
ReplyDeleteWords-a writer's tools. Choosing the right words to reach, change, and stay in the minds of the reader. Thank you, Matthew, for the inspiring examples to use as mentor texts.
ReplyDeleteWhat excellent examples of the cxconnection of beginning-to-end and the flow of one to the other. Thanks, Matthew.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing. I haven't read "My Heart" yet, but the first and last lines have grabbed me and it is now on my reading list.
ReplyDeleteWe writers need to be mindful of the emotional impact of our words. Thanks for some great examples to use as mentor texts and for the reminder about how beginning and ending sentences can pull the whole text together.
ReplyDeleteHi, Matthew! There are several books on your list that I still need to read. Creating an emotional connection with readers is worth the effort.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Matthew. Beginnings and endings are so essential to get right. Thank you for sharing these wonderful examples. I’ll have to check out the ones I haven’t read now :)
ReplyDeleteThis is so simply put! Thank you so much. This gives me a thought to read first page-last page, before I read the "middle". I love this! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you for multiple insights in these posts -- beginnings and ending and how they fit together.. AND contributing to the wider overall emotional core of the story to be impactful. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThank you for introducing me to these mentor texts and their words. I particularly like how "Hands Up!" mixes Spanish and English words. Each has staying power.
ReplyDeleteI have 36 books here and I want to type out their first and last lines. I could only get 2 of these books. I look forward to reading The Bell Rang and Iver and Ellsworth.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful collection of books that reflect how words can stick with you and bring special meaning to you.
ReplyDeleteMany of these books are not available at my library, but perhaps they'll be among future selections they bring in. I am interested in reading all of these. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreat selection for today - thank you. The writing within your blog post is a fine example of inspiring writing as well.
ReplyDeleteLovely examples of first and last lines. I am still waiting for several, but thoroughly enjoyed Finn's Feather and The Bell Rang.
ReplyDeleteI particularly enjoyed reading Honeysmoke. I love reading books that have a little something extra and these are all great examples of that. The power of books!
ReplyDeleteThese are great new books and I wil check them all out from my library. Iusually go through all the books listed and find that I've read quite a few, but not this time. Anxious to see and read these all.
ReplyDeleteThank you Matt for sharing the words - beginnings and endings - of these mentor texts.
ReplyDeleteA great variety of diverse books. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteWhat great mentor texts. I especially enjoyed Finn's Feather and Iver & Ellsworth. They were both so sweet yet reaching out to children's feelings about death and friendship.
ReplyDeleteWasn't able to find all of these but certain I will enjoy those I did. Thanks Matthew.
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Matthew! Thank you for sharing these wonderful examples first and last sentences.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing beginnings and endings...and the seed that was planted.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sharing these!
ReplyDeleteI loved each of these choices!! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteLove the book selections! I wish our library had more of these. Thanks for sharing your insights. :)
ReplyDeleteIt's always a delight to read book recommendations from Matthew Winner.
ReplyDeleteSuzy Leopold
How interesting to look at books by their first and last lines. I want mine to start and end strong.
ReplyDeleteDarcee Freier
Great titles for today. I found Hands Up! especially powerful. The author's and illustrator's notes added so much.
ReplyDeleteI love to read the first and last lines of books! Thank you for this awesome list. Very cool that Super Satya Saves the Day takes place in Hoboken (lived there for 10 years).
ReplyDeleteThese titles all seem to capture the depth we are striving for. I await several of these titles still from my library, looking forward to seeing them all. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you for these diverse examples of powerful language and the impact that great writing can have in a variety of styles.
ReplyDeleteAppreciate the reminder to read first and last lines. Powerful beginnings and powerful endings in the examples you provided. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThese titles have been added to the Beginning and Ending Strong list here: https://www.facebook.com/notes/reforemo/beginning-and-ending-strong-mentor-texts/2105014613076215/
ReplyDeleteNice examples of how to skillfully get in and out of a story.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful language! Thanks for sharing this list.
ReplyDeleteThanks for this list of books that have depth.
ReplyDeleteI always find it helpful to see starts and ends laid out like this! You can definitely see where some of the ends tie back directly to the start.
ReplyDeleteThese few lines evoke so much - imagery, emotion, depth, and fun. Thank-you for these beautiful mentor texts, and for the lessons you brought us through each one.
ReplyDeleteAw, I love this list! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteSo powerful, to look for the thematic meaning that is not stated. I'm especially impressed with Finn's Feather and My Heart, both of which deal with deep, human emotions.
ReplyDeleteI second the THANK YOU to the links to your earlier lists. I'll be looking them up!
So many excellent mentor text suggestions to check out. Thanks for taking time to share your extensive knowledge of powerfully written, meaningful books!
ReplyDeleteThank you for this list of moving picture books. The meaning of these books stays with you long after you read them.
ReplyDeleteI always pay extra attention to first lines and endings, and try to identify what makes them so special. Thanks for sharing these with us, Matthew.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great list. A few I haven't heard of yet, so that's always a plus. Also, seeing what you identify as the meaning is interesting (doesn't always match mine), so I want to reread a few. Thanks!
ReplyDeletethe sights, words and sounds of RING THE BELL are still with me.
ReplyDeleteMany of these books were new to me. They were wonderful! Thanks for sharing, I excited to look more closely at first and last lines.
ReplyDeleteI think these words stay with you not because of the words themselves, but how they capture -- and bring home -- the heart of the story. For me, the power of words is what Julia Sarcone-Roach did in THERE ARE NO BEARS IN THIS BAKERY. The way she describes sounds of the night. How she describes night itself ("after the sun rolled off the edge of the sky"). Every spread has at least one phrase that caught my breath.
ReplyDeleteThese are wonderful. HANDS UP gave me goosebumps. Thank you for nudging us to unfold the layers of meaning.
ReplyDeleteSome powerful stories here. I generally check out my books from the library but there's always a few that I just have to order. Thank you for sharing these thoughtful titles Matthew
ReplyDeleteThis list is wonderful! Just read MY HEART yesterday. I love pulling out beginning and ending lines. Gives you a glimpse and can compel you to read!
ReplyDeleteSuch a rich, varied selection that would appeal so many different readers and listeners! Thanks
ReplyDeleteLove this...."Words travel with her."
ReplyDeleteAlas, I was only able to acquire two of the mentor texts highlighted in today’s posts as they were the only ones available in my library system. I previously heard of IVER AND ELLSWORTH through Matthew’s podcast and eagerly look forward to requesting its acquisition. It sounds gorgeously poignant.
ReplyDeleteI loved the way that FINN’S FEATHER approached its main conflict from the side. What ultimately becomes a case of bibliotherapy is first staged as a mystery: where did this feather come from? Why is it so important? And who is Hamish? There are enticing, emotional clues along the way: the saddened responses of the adults a clear indication to older readers that what we are witnessing here is the prolonged aftermath of a personal tragedy. The wounds are not quite as fresh as the initial impact that we’ve observed in other mentor texts this month like NANA UPSTAIRS… This is grief that has set in and made itself at home, has almost become normal and accepted by this time, but now an enigmatic feather—perhaps from an angel—has arrived to suffuse that long-standing grief with a touch of hope. The feather itself becomes less and less important as the story goes on. How appropriate for this post concerning meaning beyond words? The feather is the word, the very title of the book, but where the meaning really lies here is in the effect it has on the characters. The renewed joy, the determination, the inventiveness, the belief that truly anything is possible. The feather itself may be soiled and frayed by the story’s end, but its meaning is indeed perfect.
Thank you these book suggestions. Some I have not heard of and now I am anxious to get my hands on them. You have a wide variety of books and even with your short descriptions the meaning is visible. This post is exactly why ReFoReMo is so valuable.
ReplyDeletea fantastic and inspirational list!
ReplyDeleteMany of these books have that "stick to your ribs” quality. Definitely ones that will stay with the reader. Thank you for the list as there were many that I had not yet read.
ReplyDeleteThese are lovely examples. So many great PBs that lift a person.
ReplyDeleteThank you for these examples--such rich themes!
ReplyDeleteI have got to get my hands on a copy of Born Bad most of all. Thank you for the heads up and analysis, well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this list of powerful books. I loved how Anika Aldamuy Denise interwove plants growing as an analogy for Pura Belpre's life work - "Now a new island stretches before her - ripe for planting seeds of the cuentos she carries" until "The seeds she has planted, the roots that grew shoots into the open air of possibility, have become a lush landscape..."
ReplyDeleteI cannot wait to read Born Bad and Iver and Ellsworth. You're right, words are powerful. Thank you for the inspirations.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this list of powerful books. I loved how Anika Aldamuy Denise interwove plants growing as an analogy for Pura Belpre's life work - "Now a new island stretches before her - ripe for planting seeds of the cuentos she carries" until "The seeds she has planted, the roots that grew shoots into the open air of possibility, have become a lush landscape..."
ReplyDeleteI love listening to Matthew's podcast. These are powerful examples of why picture books mean so much to us all.
ReplyDeleteGreat examples. Thank you Matthew!
ReplyDeleteThese beginnings invite readers in. The endings satisfy. thank you for these eloquent examples.
ReplyDeleteGreat titles! Thank you Matthew!
ReplyDeleteThanks Matthew, for another list of titles that shine in their word choice! Such impactful openers and satisfying closers.
ReplyDeleteI was trying to post last week, as I was trying to check out some of these books, and the library on-line option wouldn't allow me, as I already had over 50 books checked out and 50 on order. I've since fixed that problem. These are great examples Matthew. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGreat examples! Thank you, Matthew!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Matthew! I haven't read all of these just yet, but am looking forward to reading more words that pack a powerful punch. :)
ReplyDeleteI loved Iver and Ellsworth oh so much. I've never heard of this one and I love this unique story of friendship! Also, I've heard a lot about Honeysmoke, and love the meaning behind the color. Beautiful choices!
ReplyDeleteThank you for this great list of recommendations, Matthew! I always think I'm a good reader, then I see ones that I would have missed if someone hadn't pointed them out. Several of those on this list!
ReplyDeleteI love this so much! I often try to look at the first and last lines when working on a MS and this is a good reminder to do that with mentor texts. And thank you for your podcast; it’s a favorite!
ReplyDeleteThese are beautiful stories! Thanks for the list.
ReplyDeleteEach of these books look at growth and transition in a different way, whether it be the power to change your mind or the power to change your world. Excellent book list. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful examples and mentor texts. And thanks for the links to your older posts. I will go back and re-read them all!
ReplyDeleteMany goosebumps reading this group of texts. Thank you! What gifts.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful book, My Heart by Corinna Luyken! So much said in a few words.
ReplyDeleteI want to read them all! Matthew Winner, I'm beyond words! (A small robbery there to express my feelings! No offense!)
These are lovely examples and I love how you concisely identified the deeper messages. I had a wonderful chat with my kids about them. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteAwesome selections! Especially, The Bell Rang, which knocked my socks off. Thank you, Matthew.
ReplyDeleteThank you for these wonderful examples, I'm looking so forward to studying them
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ReplyDeleteOo, I have to check out Real Boat so I can become a Real Author. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful post, and an enriching list of books. I love this:
ReplyDelete"These words, like those you’ll write in your own story, have the power to reach readers, change readers, stay with readers."
Yes! It is the words that reach us, that resonate somehow, that truly stay with us forever. Thank you!
Thanks so much for the wonderful post.
ReplyDeleteGreat post---Behold the power of a book that sticks with you long after you're done reading it!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the inspiration, Matthew! This year, these words of YOURS are especially inspirational: "These words, like those you’ll write in your own story, have the power to reach readers, change readers, stay with readers." I mean, that's exactly what we're all striving for in a nutshell! :)
ReplyDeleteWow, the depth in these texts is profound. The Bell Rang is so evocative, it grabs my heart. And My Heart is so REAL, but wonderful as it opens up the reality of choice of response and attitude to the child. Also loved Finn's Feather's voice and weighty message.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Matthew - I love a good beginning and ending that brings everything all together. The two books I enjoyed most from this list were Iver and
ReplyDeleteEllsworth and Planting Stories.
Matthew, I always appreciate your insights. I am just back from out of the country so my library book stack is big. I may not catch up with everyone of these books but I am trying. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteI love circular stories - it's great seeing how these beginning and endings link.
ReplyDeleteI especially like Iver and Ellsworth. I have a copy and I never tire of reading it. Matthew, you are a fountain of knowledge and we appreciate your input. I enjoyed your 12 x 12 webinar.
ReplyDeleteI love isolating the beginning and end when studying books! Thank you for your reading list! <3
ReplyDeleteBeautiful examples. I really appreciate the insights on all of these. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteI love how you described these books as stories that "carry more weight than their combined space on the page." What a beautiful list of mentor reads. Each one was moving in its own way. Iver and Ellsworth in particular surprised me with how much it affected me long after I turned the final page. I will be returning to these books many times over to try to infuse this kind of impact in my own stories. Thank you for sharing!
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